Reviews for Orange Spark |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the chapter. I like that team seven is getting closer to each other |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for the update. looking forward to the next |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would like to start with i still love this story but i do have some complaints. I feel like naruto personality keeps shifting from happy and sour. Like with Kakashi sometimes i feel like he hates him then other times he doesn’t mind him. I also feel like you have just have turned naruto into his canon counterpart. I do know that you want him to still have his happiness, but i feel like the the changes in his personality are so spontaneous that i’m reading about 2 different naruto put together. Like im still trying to figure out if this is a, i wont say darker naruto but a more serious naruto or a goofy naruto like canon. i feel like your naruto wouldn’t past out from training Because i felt that it didn’t match with his character. But in saying all that keep the good work up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() SasuHaku yaoi when? Lol. Also, I hope Naruto hasn't given up Shunshin in his fighting style. It's so under utilized in the show imo. So is kawarimi and bunshin (the illusion type). Anyways, I want more now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for the chapter. looking forward to see where this goes |
![]() ![]() ![]() so far I'm liking the story really they should have done something like this in the anime/manga |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting with how naruto is interacting with wave's population I can't wait to see how you have him use the shunshin in battle |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing job so far! Ive been on this site for longer than i care to admit, and i find that i have trouble finding well written stories that dont fall into terrible tropes, cringe, or general disarray or poor writing. So far your pacing has been perfect, descriptive, original, and kept everyone in character while developing them in your own way, super excited for the next chapter! On a specific note i love how naruto seems a tad (belivably so) angrier, and more spiteful as you gave him a glimpse of what he lost in his mother, a perspective of his villages failures, and a taste of what having loved ones could be with hinata. And they could be believable factors that make him more spiteful towards those who wronged him, genuinely well done, i love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() The one thing I really love about this story is that you take your time in telling the story. Like there isn't that much time skips. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Story is picking up! Always thought learning elemental training in wave arc seemed odd because lets be honest who carrys the chakra paper on them at all time? Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really well thought out chapter. Any changes made to cannon felt natural not forced and I'm excited to see where this goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, so is naruto going to find out he was Inu(dog)? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. I kinda feel like Naruto is leaning a little a little too aggressive towards his team. I'm not expecting the happy-go-lucky idiot, but he kinda feels like he's always angry and miserable with his team. I understand that it's hard to strike a balance between the two, but I just don't want him leaning too far the other way. I assume things get better between him and Kakashi soon. Also, I feel like Sakura's poor treatment of Naruto is being a bit exaggerated. Nearly every time she opens her mouth, she insults him. She wasnt a great character early on, but that's what fanfiction is for, right? Writing them better? I'm not a fan of bashing and hope she matures soon. Hope I'm not being too harsh, I've just seen too many potentially great stories go sideways, so I want to help. Looking forward to more! |