Every word feels like it belongs exactly where it is. You have a rare talent for rhythm and flow in storytelling. Your creativity really shines through in this story. It’s so original and refreshing to read something that feels so different from everything else out there . You’ve got a true gift for storytelling! – Laurie Kenneth

I think annabeth needs percy to get there ASAP

i have a question. why could Annabeth always see the thestrals? she must have been 12/13 before she disappeared in this story and Thalia didn't exactly die. the first canon deaths didn't happen before battle of labyrinth which happened when she was 15. s little confused