Reviews for How?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6
Very nice. I am not even going to pretend that I undrstood the stuff about King Arthur but the rest is well written.
heffronma5 chapter 18 . 3/30
I think that this chapter - Bonus Chapter - would be better off being known as - Epilogue - as it fits so well within the story.

Talking about the story - Thank you for writing it - I have enjoyed reading it from chapter 1 thru to the three words "The End. Again".
BlazeStryker chapter 5 . 3/22
Head. Bass. Turds. Must. Die.
Not a bit of that is over one syllable for the love of-
J chapter 8 . 3/16
NO. NEVER. Ron attacked Malfoy in second year for calling Hermione that, remember?! Why have you done this?
And I don't recall Snape or Malfoy getting excluded for that...
That's it. I'm done.
J chapter 5 . 3/16
Does Molly not know that her own husband's mother was a Black? And wasn't she a Prewett herself?
And the list grows. NO. No way Molly would be ok with that, none at all. Again, unless Albus has spelled her and Ron, - and I am losing hope of that, and coming to the conclusion that you just hate them and it's a bash fic - this is just wrong. The REAL Molly would turn on Dumbledore for that sort of thing, the most of all of them!

And how did they make Dumbledore change secret keeper? Or did Sirius do it while Dumbles was unconscious?
J chapter 4 . 3/16
I always thought Angie was a pure or half blood?

Dumbledore wouldn't be stupid enough to decline an offer like that, and if he did, they wouldn't be stupid enough to not be suspicious of why!

Angie isn't stupid. She wouldn't think the head of the DMLE would prank them like that.
And there are some full traditionalist purebloods in Gryffindor too like McLaggen. No way the whole house knows nothing of this. You do generalise don't you?
And then the purebloods in gryffindor run out showing they DO know, so that contradicts a bit doesn't it?
J chapter 3 . 3/16
Luna isn't highborn! And she doesn't act like that either, she's almost ethereal. Their house has less rooms and less space than the Burrow. If either of them were, it'd be Neville.

I really doubt Harry's reaction to Malfoy would have been any different if he did know, Malfoy started it acting like a git to Hagrid and Ron.

Let me guess, Snape is going to get the excuse of 'it was Dumbledore pulling up his emotions' to cover the fact he is a spiteful bully all on his own in canon?

Why is Ron joining the list of people you seem to have it out for? He's not anywhere near this bad.
I can't see McGonagall doing that either, she'd come down on Ron like a ton of bricks, not Hermione. She'd agree with everything Hermione said! The list gets longer.
Since when is Ron, Crabbe? You really do hate him, don't you? What even is this fic?
The only way this gets salvaged is if this isn't really his choice.

It might be fun to you. But it's not fun to those of us who hate loyal characters to be so twisted like that. It's not fun at all. If it stays this way I'm leaving.
J chapter 2 . 3/16
Er, who was saying what there? You didn't say who was talking and once Kreacher joined in there were 3 and no way to know which of the 2 humans was which! Who called Mrs Weasley a Banshee, and who didn't even trust the Twins?

Sirius, silencio on her and then you can talk!

I think, after fourth year, Ron would ASK why Harry is acting different not just get jealous again.

They could argue with Sirius about that tho, unless he's proven innocent he can't really do anything against them. He could throw the order out, but then what, he'd not get what he wanted if he did...

I hope you weren't implying that Molly and Ron were stealing from Harry? They'd never do that. Tell me now if this is a Weasley basher, so I can leave. But if she didn't want the key for bad reasons, why insist once Harry said no, as was his right?
Or is Ron being spelled or something by Dumbledore?
J chapter 1 . 3/16
Whoa? Susan and Hannah don't *hate* him! Susan never did anything against him at all, and is barely mentioned until she joins the DA. Hannah was just scared and listened to Earnie too much in CoS, and was a bit of a bitch in GoF because she was angry on Cedric's behalf. But they both believed him after Cedric's death, and both joined the DA. Both fight with him in the final battle and are nice to him from the end of book 5 onwards. Hate is far too strong a word!
They certainly wouldn't have been vicious, because by the time they would have talked to Amelia about it they'd know the truth of each year, and they are not bad people. Why do you seem to hate them?
Guest chapter 11 . 2/24
Quality really took a dive in this chapter.
Warrior0974 chapter 18 . 2/7
This story was a fun read
Linda chapter 17 . 2/1
Awesome story and lol on the last question
011239 chapter 8 . 1/25
The Marauders made his life a living hell throughout all of his school years driving him into the arms of the death eaters and purposely destroying his and Lily's relationship so that one of their buddies could date her not to mention several pranks that if they were adults it would realistically be called assault or attempted murder one with planning that would carry a sentence of 25 to life just putting that out there
pincho chapter 17 . 1/23
So a lot of plot from one or two other stories written pre 2014. Otherwise It was good and unlike those (that I can recall), it is finished! So thank you very much for that and for sharing your take on "how did the ministry know?" And "why did Hogwarts never have the money for better things as an elite school?"
pincho chapter 16 . 1/23
Honestly this was stupid and unnecessary: But Harry promised himself, to remember to ask Hermione to become his sister

This story isn't about that, Hermione's rile in it is very minor just like there is no romance or relationship talk past friendships. Harry doesn't know what romance, or sibling feelings and relationships are. He is still struggling with his friendship with Ron which is pretty cut and dry in this story. Next your gonna add ginny to this or some other girl that's never talked to him, or that has only been shown as a friend like Greengrass or Davis.
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