The story was good but you ruined it . The same thing will happen over and over again bad guy evil try to kill good guy , good guy too good , fails to save bad guy , bad guy gets stronger for bs reasons , rinse and repeat . Good guy wins but has to apologize to other bad guys?

I LOVE the trash talking!

I love this story so much! Every chapter is simply amazing and once more Kushina is one of the best things in this story and the OC Biju Kumoko. I also really enjoy how you are writing Hinata and her relationship with Naruto as well as Tayuya. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter and hoping Hinata can be free of the curse mark before too long.

if im wrong please twll me but im imagining that naruto looks like a femboy twink sakuna with his four arms and by the way you describe his clothesand makeup, minus the weird face and eyes. of course. if there is a relative image to reference please let us know.

i binged the whole story so far and i really enjoyed it. please keep them comming!

"Super done. That's like 'regular' done, but super."

Gotta love this expression.

I love Katsuyu, she's just crazy enough to love, but notncrazy enough to be incompetent. The World would be a better place if more people knew how much compliments were worth.

Naruto figured it out! Well done!

Love the chapter. Thank you!

i feel this could of been a good time to have itachi give naruto shisui sharingan or do you plan on having naruto just have one eye the whole time?

This new language thing is unnecessary and actually detracts from the flow of the story.

The omakes are hilarious, can't wait for the next chapter

Give us a chapter where Naruto learns to summon Kumoko please

naruto really improved in fuinjutsu with his mother spirit help.
hope naruto will be able to convice the council.
whatever, like naruto said, death and banishment will be both a win for pedosnake, either its prevent the former oto squad to reveal more critical info about the sannin to konoha or it could allo orochimaru get interesting data about konoha when he put his claw onto them once out of the village border.

I have a funny feeling snake-pedo is not living past Shippuden era this go around.

always great to see an update

Well shit how many more times can snake-pedo freaking interfere like this.

This has been a good read!
Picked it up yesterday, Nd have been reading it since.

I'm picking up some similarities to a Slaanesh Naruto story I once read.

Reading Hinata's gradual decline, despite being with Naruto has been saddening, but I think you're handling these intricacies well.

Orochimaru got a terribly strange "redemption arc" in canon that didn't feel well done or deserved. I'm sensing that you do at least want to somehow give Orochimaru some sort of character growth and development through his interactions with Naruto.