Reviews for I wasn't gonna let it happen to you
guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2023
Oh, look who it is. The pathetic good for nothing loser who keeps coming up with disgusting pisspoor sex comments to please himself and stain stories with his reviews. It really shows new level of pathetic if you imagine stories as your own sex toys to screw with that you are incapable of finding a good girl to screw. I wonder why. Maybe it's because you're so impotent you can't get your cock up by a girl, so you waste your time on screwing stories. Maybe you're so impotent yor cock can get up on nothing, so you use your words and keyboard as your 'dick'. That shows how pathetic you are.

You know what? Shove your so called 'dick' deep in your asshole or down your throat so hard you'll choke for all I care.

Your review is nothing but irrelevant pile of bullshit no one gives a fuck about.

Begone and grovel on the floor and whine
Farting guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2023
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OmniBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla chapter 1 . 8/24/2023
Cool one-shot.

No kidding, the lack of fallout from Pariah is just astonishing, not to mention the parallels between Alicia’s and Lois’s predicament the next episode right away and anyone saying Clark didn’t love Alicia needs to get their brain examined.

It's borderline stupid and idiotic for Clark to say to Lana he didn't love Alicia

Agreed that Smallville Clark/Lois is one of the best adaptations of the pairing, where as the comics sucks. Superman & Lois version I find more or less fine, but too much family drama added there, which kinda hinders the story.

Also consider into fact that Geoff paralyzed Coop, his college roommate who was hospitalized as a result and Geoff would later smother him with a pillow to death to keep his secret hidden.

Had Clark not gotten to Lois in time, that would have been two murders Geoff would have committed as well.

The parallel between Pariah and Recruit is so obvious yet the writers don't want to have Clark acknowledge it, because that would mean acknowledging Alicia and her death.
guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2023
To FanFiction Enthousiasm:

If you are a dude, kindly cut off your dick and balls and shove them deep down your throat and choke on it. If you are a woman, strip yourself naked and roll down on shards of glass and skin yourself alive, then pour acid over your pussy and asshole and scream in agony, then shove a rabid possum inside your pussy and let it rip you apart and die in agony.
Speed Reader chapter 1 . 8/7/2023
Excellent story.
hunter41963801 chapter 1 . 8/6/2023
Great one-shot, Aragorn

I can only guess things would have been different if Alicia stayed on the show

Anyway, keep up the great work and I look forward to more one-shots and any new stories that you make.

Have a good day, Aragorn.
Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 8/6/2023
I agree that Clark should have grieved more about Alicia. They did the same to Kyla Willowbrook.
OmniIBIBUltraInstinctGodzilla chapter 1 . 8/6/2023
Cool one-shot.

No kidding, the lack of fallout from Pariah is just astonishing, not to mention the parallels between Alicia’s and Lois’s predicament the next episode right away and anyone saying Clark didn’t love Alicia needs to get their brain examined.

It's borderline stupid and idiotic for Clark to say to Lana he didn't love Alicia

Agreed that Smallville Clark/Lois is one of the best adaptations of the pairing, where as the comics sucks. Superman & Lois version I find more or less fine, but too much family drama added there, which kinda hinders the story.

Also consider into fact that Geoff paralyzed Coop, his college roommate who was hospitalized as a result and Geoff would later smother him with a pillow to death to keep his secret hidden.

Had Clark not gotten to Lois in time, that would have been two murders Geoff would have committed as well.

The parallel between Pariah and Recruit is so obvious yet the writers don't want to have Clark acknowledge it, because that would mean acknowledging Alicia and her death.
Cer1992 chapter 1 . 8/6/2023
Great one-shot. Yeah, this was merely one episode (week) later and the parallels between Alicia and Lois are so glaringly obvious.
Stand with Ward and Queen chapter 1 . 8/6/2023
Good one shot.

I'd like to think Clark was thinking of Alicia when confronting Geoff, but given how the writers pretend Alicia doesn't exist except to prop up Clana, I doubt it.

Do not get me started on the bs of it all.

And typical Clark/Lois LOL!

Agreed on Clark/Lana. It was oaky the first two seasons, then Lana gets increasingly toxic and treats Clark worse and worse and he just takes it because the narrative makes him into her doormat.
The Final Shinobi chapter 1 . 8/6/2023
good one-shot bro.

very emotional and heartfelt.

i totally agree.

stay safe and well wishes to you and your loved ones.
Bl4ckHunter chapter 1 . 8/6/2023
Good one-shot.

No kidding, the lack of fallout from Pariah is just astonishing, not to mention the parallels between Alicia’s and Lois’s predicament the next episode right away and anyone saying Clark didn’t love Alicia needs to get their brain examined.

Yeah, Smallville Clark/Lois is one of the best adaptations of the pairing, whereas the comics sucks. S&L version I find OK, but too much family drama added there, IMO.