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This is a masterpiece. As simple.

Stand proud this chapter was amazing

Im surprise at hoe much i like this story

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Mari got fricken puppetnapped! God I love this story. Anyway, it's a good chapter and I like that you're going full steam ahead with Pizza Sim. I do wonder when we'll finally see Henry and get a peek into what he's thinking about all of this. I'm pretty sure he thinks he's doing the right thing seeing as how in the original version he did this to free the souls, but I'm not entirely sure he's aware that they grew up or maybe he is and just feels like it would be better if everything related to Fazbear's was burned.

Besides that I think the next chapter is when I'll know if the Spring Bonnie suit is occupied or not and just who is in the driver's seat. I can't wait to see who it will be if you're going with the possession route. As always I await for more.

You forgot the periods at the end of sentences that are in quotation marks.

Huh, I was wondering where Elizabeth got to. So Pizza Sim, huh? Does that mean this 'John' guy is bringing these things together to destroy them this time? If so that's pretty cool, I do wonder if this character is actually who he says he is as I think it would be interesting if this were actually Henry even though it was said he was dead. I'm also curious about Springtrap as he is in the building, whether he's occupied or not is still to be determined.

If you are going with the actual storyline of Pizza Sim, it makes me wonder how The Cove gang will react to it. I feel like that's a bundle of drama just waiting to happen and I can't wait for Evan & Mike to realize Circus Baby is Lizzy.

Is Fazbear Entertainment going to capitalize on the terrors done to the franchise? I mean Fazbear's Frights could have only worked because it was decades after the fact and if I remember right this story is based in the 90s so that is going to backfire completely and utterly as that scar is still relatively fresh. Also, we know that Springtrap is likely to be a genuine thing. I do wonder if it'll only be Afton that is back though as Evan did bring up Cassidy and how powerful she was but I also like the idea that because William is the one that caused all this and has experimented with Remnant and maybe Agony that when he died he became far more powerful than Cassidy because of his exposure to the stuff as in Cassidy's case she was just pissed the hell off. So I think that either both William & Cassidy will be back but fighting over the body, William is the only one coming back, or the most unlikely possibility but one I'll acknowledge anyway is that Cassidy comes back but because of something else, possibly related to Agony, is twisted beyond recognition.

Anyway, I can't wait for the emotional turmoil in the near future.

Now I wonder...is this a replacment fore Fazbear Frights? Ore are we diving into Pizza simulator and its gonna be revealed the final boss is a misguided Henry thinking hes doing good when no hes just srewing the animatronics over. Then again Charlie saw his bodey so I doubt its him. So I think its more likley this will be where Springtrap makes his appearance.

Corious to see where this goes. Personly im pretty sure Samantha is Circus Baby ore rather Elizabeth who relised "Oh shit that wasnt dad I was killing it was my brother!"

Whoo! Freddy's is coming back to town! That's not going to be an issue for the Cove Gang I'm sure.

Anyway, good chapter and since Freddy's is coming back I can't help but wonder if its possibly the same location William died in. If its not, eh, I can live with it but if it is there's a chance that Mike may want to see the body. I feel like he still has unresolved feelings toward his father and even though it would be a bad idea I think he may seek the Spring Bonnie suit out anyway, if it hasn't been sealed away.

That brings me to another thing, is William Afton ever going to return or is he fully gone? I don't know if you clarified that or not besides Mari saying he was forced to pass on but couldn't William just crawl his way back? Again I'm not sure if you've clarified or not but I feel like William coming back could open up a lot of paths for the story to go or just save him for a possible sequel 30 years down the line or maybe I'm just coping with the fact my favorite character will never show up in this story in a more official capacity. Plus I kinda wanna see these versions of the characters react to the appearance of Springtrap and his kick-ass design and all the emotional train wrecks William's reemergence would cause.

Anyway, thank you for the chapter and as always I wait for more.

Wonderful story so far! I’m looking forward to reading what’s next.

Chaos, Mayhem, and Murder! Wheeheehee!

Good stuff.