Should have made issei a human dragon hybrid at least then their would be a believable reason why issei had a sacred gear. If hes dragon and devil theirs no way hed have one

Well to be honest compared to your other fics this is actualy a bit of a disappointment in tegards to you writing quality as well as there only being 2 major changes so far .

While it follows you usual trend of focusing on the main character (that I'm not complaining about) you usualy caise every character that stands with your main one to also improve as it goes along but this feels like only Issei has any intelligence while the rest are acting like their canon selves

As to writing quality i dont know this just doesnt flow like your other fics . It might just be me but it feels forced at some stages and then draged out at another .

lol people read a few chapters then comment trash fic continue reading comments trash fic again if it was as trash as you say why do you continue to read

Fucking pathetic bitch trash fic

Never liked Xenovia. She is a major hypocritical bitch in canon and the narrative just glosses over it 'cause 'hot'. Kind of hope she doesn't join the peerage in this story.

How come you renamed riser’s rook?

Love the storyRise Of The Devil Dragon. Just followed the writer and story.

I really enjoyed this version of Issei and Rias. Finally, a love story with a happy ending. Not a perverted Issei who could not see what he had.

pathetic... shit fic

Awesome win for Issei, keep up the great work.

I'm liking it so far but I'm curious on why Issei is going easy on them. Simply do your job and finish them off quickly. No need them to get a lucky shot off. This is a easy way just to follow cannon. The best thing for Rias would be be to destroy Riser's peerage as quickly as they can. With Riser's ability to get angry quickly seeing his peerage being destroyed quickly and ruthlessly would probably cause him to react badly. Issei should know this in this.

So, I started reading this story a couple of days ago. I am loving it so far. I like the idea that Issei is not a bloody idiot pervert and actually has his life together. The backstory is sad, but interesting, while also creating a completely different atmosphere for the interactions of Issei with the others. I am curious as to how the fight in the Rating Game will go differently from the cannon. Earlier in the story, when Issei dispatched some of the Fallen Angels, that really surprised and impressed me. I really hope this story gets regular updates and wish the best to the author.

I find it highly idiotic that Issei joined Rias’ peerage since Issei is greatly stronger than her by miles, y’know being a Devil-Dragon Hybrid and being the wielder of the Boosted Gear. Seriously what was the point of him joining in the first place, I know Issei was considering it on Sirzechs’ behest, but, c’mon there is no point of him joining. The only reason why I can think of him joining is the Riser situation and down right plot convenience and nothing else.

Just out of curiosity are you going to follow the anime or Light Novel? Just wondering if you plan to add or change the events that follow Vol 2 Phoenix of the Battle School..

Awesome chapter, can’t wait for the next one