Reviews for Rogue Replacement: A Marvel Story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The meeting with Fisk strikes me as odd. From what I know of the character he is the kind to take a summons like that as an insult. You don't call Fisk to you, you request to go to him and he might allow it. Of course you can play it as him being sort of afraid of Mirage's powers, but I would suspect Fisk started planning countermeasures as soon as Mirage and Felicia left his office that first meeting. I don't know. Seems out of character for Fisk to be so compliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Literally how is ANY of this anyone except Ilyana's fault? She has been nothing but a bitch since she was introduced, and then she is inconvenienced by something SHE did so she banishes him to Limbo? And doesn't plan to bring him back? How wouldnyou let an unstable psychopath like that into a school with kids? |
![]() ![]() ![]() nevermind i googled it apparently ive never heard it until LGBTQ stuff a year or so ago i don't get it |
![]() ![]() ![]() pan in 2010 2011 ? pan my God man just call her bisexual at that point ? pan what |
![]() ![]() Bizarre kinda cringe dialogue |
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![]() ![]() The plot is engaging, the story is well written and it's very refreshing to see scenes from various movies rewritten so inventively. However, where this story falls down is that its lead character is a Gary Stu and it ultimately makes reading this unrewarding. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Hydra and now Sinister in play! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... you kinda, well, your writing is good. But I'm rather left confused by all the parts with Spiderman. They all feel rather clumsy and have poor pacing, least to me. Guess that makes you having real comic book writer potential. One moment, we have Peter having the worst days of his life- then nothing. We don't get back to that. We get Tyson's harem adventures. Man seriously left a whole interesting clone arc hanging for Jubilee and vampires. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can he permanently learn his absorbed mutations should he have to overload? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was very surprised you added the vampire cure. I thought for sure you'd leave it out. Now that it's in the story, is there an in-story reason why Tyson both forgot about it and had to go through this intense dramatic quest to cure Jubilee? Or do we need to look outside the story for that? If you forgot, I get it. I've done it too as an author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, the fanfic would’ve been better without it being a harem. Look, I know it probably sounds good to sleep with different women, but thinking about it logically, it’s not ideal. I think you should’ve made it monogamous to make it more realistic, as I can’t see any woman agreeing to be in a harem. In our reality, situations like this only exist when either the man has all the power in the relationship or when the woman is bi-sexual. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One heck of a satisfying end of the Blade Arc! |