Good chap

Great chap

The plot is engaging, the story is well written and it's very refreshing to see scenes from various movies rewritten so inventively. However, where this story falls down is that its lead character is a Gary Stu and it ultimately makes reading this unrewarding.

Love it! Hydra and now Sinister in play!

Wow... you kinda, well, your writing is good. But I'm rather left confused by all the parts with Spiderman. They all feel rather clumsy and have poor pacing, least to me. Guess that makes you having real comic book writer potential. One moment, we have Peter having the worst days of his life- then nothing. We don't get back to that. We get Tyson's harem adventures. Man seriously left a whole interesting clone arc hanging for Jubilee and vampires.

Can he permanently learn his absorbed mutations should he have to overload?

I was very surprised you added the vampire cure. I thought for sure you'd leave it out.

Now that it's in the story, is there an in-story reason why Tyson both forgot about it and had to go through this intense dramatic quest to cure Jubilee? Or do we need to look outside the story for that? If you forgot, I get it. I've done it too as an author.

Honestly, the fanfic would’ve been better without it being a harem. Look, I know it probably sounds good to sleep with different women, but thinking about it logically, it’s not ideal. I think you should’ve made it monogamous to make it more realistic, as I can’t see any woman agreeing to be in a harem. In our reality, situations like this only exist when either the man has all the power in the relationship or when the woman is bi-sexual.

One heck of a satisfying end of the Blade Arc!

Eh, I was willing to give the story a chance, but I don’t really like the main character or the side characters so far. Not really my cup of tea, but it has a following, so I’m sure there are plenty of people who enjoy the story. Thanks for the work you put into it, but I’ll head out.

Interesting chapter, although I found it funny that she thought she was any threat to Azazal, since the main character did all the work. She is a far too inflated sense of her own capabilities

Thanks for the interesting chapter, although I don’t really find Illyana particularly likable as a character

Thanks for the interesting chapter

Thanks for the chapter, and considering Logan was among the people that rescued a young magneto, I imagine that there should be some good feelings there and a reason why he doesn’t kill wolverine with his metallic bones.

Thanks for the chapter, although I do hope that the rambling he tends to go on, won’t get him into trouble, since that’s kind of dumb.