Reviews for Systematic Shinobi: Multiverse Mayhem |
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leonardobluesummers chapter 26 . 1/10 Greatest side story ever lol. |
leonardobluesummers chapter 8 . 1/9 Lol |
Ashmodai chapter 26 . 1/2 How did Big P fuck you over if you clearly broke their Rules? They have a zero Tolerance policy for Sexual Violence in their Guidelines which happens in this story multiple times. |
PandoraOfVanity chapter 26 . 12/28/2024 How would he interact with there being an afterlife in bleach? What would happen if his soul got massively stronger from reishi/reiyroku or whatever it’s called. |
Derpysense chapter 21 . 12/16/2024 Damn, nice brutal ending for AFO |
Guest chapter 26 . 12/14/2024 would be kinda cool if daiki could go into bleach yoink the hogyoku, kido and learn how to make zanpakuto plus Yuruichi seducing Yuruichi would be awesome |
frazierkindrel chapter 14 . 12/3/2024 dont think its that easy to kill afo |
frazierkindrel chapter 14 . 12/3/2024 this is so unjustified in sorry i cant help it dude just wants to save people but fuck it |
frazierkindrel chapter 13 . 12/3/2024 dawg izuku isnt thats bad hes literally a 15 year old kid trying to be a hero though the anime can be cringe its not that bad and no im not a mha fanboy |
bvengeance1 chapter 26 . 11/28/2024 If you do avatar, can you have him show up a week or two before Ang come out of the ice? Have him hook up with Katara before she even meets Ang. He can already use all of the elements. By the time Ang claims to be the avatar, no one will believe him. Maybe have him knock up Azula before she goes too crazy, and because she found 'the avatar' Zuko never does. Daiki telling Azula how he is already in line to take over the Fire country will make her think he is Iroh's bastard child. If thinks she is being skip over for him, she might even help him kill her father to be able to rule beside him. If he can get Ozai into an Agni Kai, Daiki could absorb all or his attacks for a few minutes before hitting him with a Great Fire Annihilation reducing him and everything within 50 feet to ash. By the time Iroh shows up and says, 'That's not my kid.', he will be the fire lord and Azula will have a bun in the oven. Or if you want to go the god route, he could really put on a show. Have him appear in front of him counsel standing 5 feet off the ground with his aura glowing and call him out on his evil in front of everyone. Claim he was the one who convinced his father to send Iroh and his son to war hoping they would both die. Tell all that on learning that only Iroh's son died he threatened his wife that he would kill his own children if she didn't poison his father and then he banished her so she could tell anyone what happened. Call him out on being a bad ruler, a horrible father and a completely evil shit that can no longer be tolerated. Have him demand an Agni Kai to show how weak he is to a god. Have Daiki stand there for an hour until Ozai is completely exhausted while he tanks all of the fire, then walks up to Ozai and dusts him with a touch. After showing off that level of power, I am sure she would be very willing to drop to her knees and worship him. In fact, she might be fine with other girls worshiping him too. Here is a hint you might want to remember if you go Star Wars or Marvel, neither the Force nor the Infinity Gems work on something from a different dimension. |
Nextrom chapter 26 . 11/28/2024 Well still faster updating then someone who dose 1 chapter per 18 month and I like it to. |
PokeyWings207 chapter 26 . 11/24/2024 A million years later and there are no updates on any of your stories, I hate how there are many chapters on subscription sites but for those who don't pay they have to wait for one chapter a month if they're lucky, stupid Mirlnir and you too Jord, I liked you quite a bit but now with this practice I don't like you a bit, the only reliable ones are the great Dark Wolf Shiro, Bronz Deck and Starwaves, at least they do publish often. Sincerely, a Mexican with a translator |
Anon-anon chapter 26 . 11/24/2024 I know this story isn't one of your most popular ones but it probably is one of my favorites. I've always liked an idea of an all-powerful ( almost there daki heh ) character that just hands out power and upgrades to everybody that he likes regardless of consequences. I get like one punch man vibes but with a more cocky attitude and a penchant for giving out abilities. It's hilarious, charming and at times pretty damn sexy. My point is that this shit is good. Kudos man, my compliments. |
YeetOffMate chapter 26 . 11/25/2024 FUCK! I CAUGHT UP TO THIS ONE TOO!? T~T |
2Lazy2Login chapter 17 . 11/19/2024 Whiney bitches can whine. Deku isnt fit to clean Narutos' sandals. At best he's a poor imitation. Personally, I've never understood the hype over MHA. |