Reviews for Bath Of Chaos
dogbertcarroll chapter 11 . 3/27/2008
Blech. Massive rewrite needed.
Jemtlen chapter 11 . 3/26/2008
Well to be honest can't tell if there is a good story there or not. Parts seemed interesting but there is too much jumping around to really tell what is going on. I would suggest a rewrite with a more straight forward focus.
Wonderbee31 chapter 11 . 3/26/2008
Nice part, and will be looking forward to what happens when Ranma gets back hiome with all this stuff going on back there.
richexs chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
The basic sotry has a lot of potential but you skip around to much, making it difficult to keep the story progressing at a steady pace. Going over the same scene from different characters point of view is still the same scene even when you add in the thoughts of the different characters.
dogbertcarroll chapter 10 . 9/30/2004
*blink* Curious.
Zsych chapter 6 . 9/29/2004
To the best of my knowledge Akane's skill is insignificant compared to Ranma's.

She's at a lower level in her martial arts ability than Kuno.

The likelihood that she could match Ranma so easily, just because of the curse is...
a chapter 10 . 9/28/2004
a nice story, and how things are going. like the explantion of differnt fighting style. only seen so far one other fanfic author write about that. considering how everbody has to become like ranma.

ryoga would be could be a good teacher consierdering his style of fighting would be perfect match for akane. he train her before aganist kodachi and fake tendo sisters.

to grandmaster ranma really deosn't get attack that much not even by ryoga that much. the normally have there match at a abandand lot. you been reading way to much fanfiction about him.
Jerry Unipeg chapter 10 . 9/28/2004
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!
grandmaster chapter 9 . 8/16/2004
Other than Mr Directionless how many times does Ranma get attacked when at the Tendos? Very few IIRC the canon correctly. In fact the biggest battle can be put right on Nabiki's doorstep.
dogbertcarroll chapter 9 . 8/15/2004
Hehehe. Loved this chapter.
Jerry Unipeg chapter 9 . 8/14/2004
GREAT CHAPTER!
Jerry Unipeg chapter 8 . 8/14/2004
GREAT CHAPTER!
Jerry Unipeg chapter 7 . 8/14/2004
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!
Jerry Unipeg chapter 6 . 8/14/2004
GREAT CHAPTER!
Jerry Unipeg chapter 5 . 8/14/2004
GREAT CHAPTER!
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