Reviews for Rinathen's Love
kekecandyy chapter 2 . 8/10/2007
hacha it turns out i did not review for this chappie...

muahahahaha

1.0.0.

i'm so proud of myself

not of you though

you make me mad

but this was such a nice story... T_T
Laura chapter 17 . 8/4/2004
Your chapters are too short, BUT by no means are they not good. Cause they are!

Keep writing!

AND update soon.

I can't wait to see how the story ends.
LOTRbuff chapter 17 . 5/6/2004
UPDATE PLEEZ! this is really gud... i cant wait to see what is next
LOTRbuff chapter 17 . 5/3/2004
this is really good! keep on updating! i cant wait to see what happens next.
Kat Greenleaf chapter 14 . 2/25/2004
Legolas Better get Rinathen! This is suposed to be a LEGOLAS fan fic. well thats what it said on the main page! SO don't make Owacyn get the prize when Legolas is a sweet heart!
Magsluvsaragorn chapter 17 . 2/24/2004
This is a very interesting story-I really do enjoy it! no flames from me, not my style really. Sorry tho, since you seem to like roasted marshmallows, according to the notes you wrote back to other flamers...anyway, please keep this going, i'm dying to find out what happens next...just please, please, pleze! don't kill Aragorn...as u can tell from my penname, I happen to love him...
Mags
Marpessa chapter 17 . 2/23/2004
pure filth.
Pond the Wiener Dog chapter 17 . 2/22/2004
lol ok i'm still sticking with my theory! and from this chappie i still think i'm right! o0o0 big battle scene coming up soon? sounds like fun! lol i actually took the label thing from another fanfic writer, she puts quotes beofre each of her chapters, and that was one of them. it was a Harry Potter fic! lol i'm still coming off a caffine/sugar high! wo0o0o0o0o! lol ok sry! but neways, update soon! lol farewell for now, namarie mellon nin! Radiion
Galadryal chapter 17 . 2/22/2004
Hi Larvle, great story! I'm not much good at reveiwing, but this is one of the best Legolas FF I have come across (I can't write fanfic, but I'm an avid reader of it :)). I couldn't believe that Rinathen was betraying Legolas, I was so upset, I nearly cried (Yes, I am pathetic)! Please update soon! *goes down onto her knees and begs*
Galadryal
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2004
? Three words: Really Long Paragraphs. My eyes hurt from looking them! Ack, my poor eyes! *goes blind and runs smack into a wall*
kekecandyy chapter 16 . 2/10/2004
1. sess iz MINE (chek email 4 more details)
2. u call this a chappie? well, i call it a "let's torture krysti...ppie"
Pond the Wiener Dog chapter 16 . 2/9/2004
eep! thats it you get beat with geometery! *whimpers* my poor poor cranium... *pittiful whimper* y do you hate me so? lol no but now i'm back on Ri is on their side, next chapter i'm gonna think that she's evil again aren't i? but i think by now i have sufficient avidence that she is good pretending to be evil... yes, this time i am sticking with it! o0o0 and about that persons little flame thing... um yeah incase they havent noticed... elfs really r kinda... perfect. Tolkien made them that way cause he had a hard childhood and had sorta lost faith in man. so its not ur fault if the elves seem perfect... thats how they are! lol well i like ur story, i've never really read a Mary Sue (see i capitalize it for you!) where the girl did a little "oh no, i'm evil" for the evil peoples while really fighting for good thing b4. and i like Mary Sues. *shrug* mayb i'm weird, but hey, you got at least one person who likes this! and you kno what, i think fanfics should be like people, dont label them cuz they really r all different! lables are for soup cans, not people or fanfics! lol ok i'll go now! lol farewell for now, namaarie mellon nin! Radiion
Ral chapter 16 . 2/9/2004
That was it?
I've been waiting for an update for so long, and I'm all excited that you've updated, and it took me under 2 minutes to read! I'm highly disappointed you call that a chapter. Don't get me wrong, I love your story (and I do not believe it is in any way a mary-sue) but my affection is waning the longer it takes for the plot to move along. I was also wondering if you have someone as a Beta for your story, since their purpose is to fix your grammer/spelling mistakes, or to help point out plot holes, inconsistencies etc while helping keep you on track with the story. If you do not have one, I suggest getting one, and I'd be willing to help. It would make for longer chapters and more frequent updates. Wow, I'm getting better and better at rambling as I go. Any-who I'll be off now, but good luck with the next (and hopefully longer) chapter!
Ral
kekecandyy chapter 15 . 1/13/2004
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Worlds Apart MS Hunters chapter 15 . 1/13/2004
This has:
a) Terribly bad grammar,
b) Major character OCCness. You stated that had it, but you have yet to fix it.
c) Perfectness in the elf's character.
d) A tragic past.
This story has been dubbed a mary sue by the Worlds Apart Mary Sue Hunters.
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