Reviews for That Which Can't Be Seen
mattemo153 chapter 10 . 1/21/2011
McGonagall usually did and for that, he was grateful.

i think you mean lupin...right?

only other thing is that um hello 2 years for an update? heres what u need to do atleast 1 a month or discontinue it...ok? its cruel to string along people seriously its mean...anyways i really like the story! :)
Kernchen chapter 10 . 8/8/2007
I can accept that you give up on this story but it would be nice to know where to find the continuation or whatever happens... because I can't find DREAMER OF FEARS
jayley chapter 10 . 7/18/2007
i though mcgonagall was dead...
jayley chapter 9 . 7/18/2007
why is harry afraid of 'giving too much away'? what would he be giving away if they knew that sirius was his godfather, and that they were close to each other? remus too-the only thing i can think of is preferential treatment, but that doesn't seem like a good reason either
jayley chapter 8 . 7/18/2007
if muggleborns aren't allowed at school anymore, voldemort kinda gets his way
jayley chapter 6 . 7/18/2007
seriously, all very interesting, but why the lack of knowledge on magic? and good parents would prepare harry and tell him he was famous BEFORE he was MOBBED, not after...and do they honestly expect harry not to learn the truth in a month when he goes to hogwarts?
jayley chapter 5 . 7/18/2007
i'm still not sure why harry wasn't exposed to magic. i understand about the publicity and stuff, but why wouldn't they have wizarding games, or given harry any knowledge about magic? it seems odd to keep him so in the dark that he doesn't even know the name hogwarts...explain please? i get that lily can't use magic, but why wouldn't james expose harry to magic? afterall, he does have to defeat voldemort
jayley chapter 4 . 7/18/2007
...uhm, is the world darker just because? cuz harry's parents living shouldn't change much, if voldemort is still banished. so i'm assuming you just decided to make the world darker, cuz it'd be more dramatic? or did something specific happen that made it that way? guess it doesn't really matter
jayley chapter 3 . 7/18/2007
who makes a child clean on their birthday? that's horrible! seriously, i would never...
An Unknown Writer chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
WOW! I love this fic. PLEASE update!
veralynn chapter 6 . 2/23/2005
nice story and all, but he has a holly wand not a willow. and it seems kinda weird that james and lily didn't tell him ANYTHING about the wizarding world...
Gabwr chapter 8 . 10/10/2004
It is good keep going
Hermione88220 chapter 8 . 10/5/2004
Hey this is really great! I hope to read the next chapter soon. I like how you changed Harry to a normal kid in this story. Can't wait to see how the story unfolds!
Shinsei Yami chapter 8 . 9/12/2004
I love what your doing! This fic is so awesome. Your brilliant for stating over and changing it so Harry grows up with Lily and James! Your too Cool!
paradox01 chapter 8 . 9/1/2004
Lovely chapter. Liked Hermione's introduction, though the idea that they could possibly ban all muggleborn students seems a bit ridiculous doesnt it? But I suppose they thought it was better to appease Malfoy than to oppose him...

-paradox
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