Reviews for The Second Torch |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I feel bad for Ruby |
![]() ![]() cool, but can xia be a full time weekly story now? please? |
![]() ![]() A little odd that you didn't bother establishing the three-year timeskip. You usually start your epilogues off with noting how many years it's been, don't you? Poor Ruby. What happened with Amber, anyway? Can't wait for Sister Complex. Pairing undecided, but not Cinder? For some reason I'm thinking of a Jaune/Emerald/Cinder love triangle. |
![]() ![]() "And there's no business like showbusiness." A great capping off of things, and I swear Lisa/Roman is my favorite side couple, there's so much weird chemistry. |
![]() ![]() Ah Melodic Cudgel! it's good to have that classy cane back! Thanks for the shining story! |
![]() ![]() Dang, Ruby just can not ever catch a break, can she? |
![]() ![]() I Do Like Cinder and Jaune being close Like Siblings in New Story. What Why Would Cinder Work under Salem... You Say Jaune be her Minion. The Good Thing Is That Jaune would be Formally Trained..Considering he is Training as a Kid. Or You Can Have Arc Family Adopt Cinder It Would be Nice if Nicholas and his wife adopts Cinder. |
![]() ![]() On one hand, I'm laughing my ass off and cheering for Roman. On the other, Ruby should just retire. Her life is a joke now. |
![]() ![]() you're gonna make your next story jaune/blake again, like you always do. you may try to deny it, but you know that's what you want to do, and what you'll inevatably bectrying to force into, even though it's such an unnatural pairing, quoer al'aran, the literal catgirl-WEEABOO. for as much as you like to complain about, you seriously are much worse. seriously, just CRINGE |
![]() ![]() ![]() This whole story was beautiful. The day Red snaps is the day she finds out that Lisa's an item with Roman, and can thus be taken hostage to try and catch him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ngl that ending reminded me of the flcl final shot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Almost a year for this story. I'm glad I read it friend! Very amusing, very entertaining, very character driven. Always love Roman. For that new story, it would be kind of funny if that was an Amber x Jaune pairing. Until next time |
![]() ![]() ![]() Neo is right about the whole "narcissist on narcissist" between Roman and Lisa ! Ruby should not run away from the rumours but rather embrace them and make it so it seems that Roman is the one hitting on her and all these theatrical robberies are a show to get her back ! That is the best way to get back at Roman ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maaaaaaaaaaaan, idk. This was a satisfying ending to an overall good fanfic, but the moment i saw the premise for the next story i got a little disappointed. I know you have a certain style and whatnot with Jaune stories, and ive seen all your explanations on why. I was just hoping for another cast member centric story to challenge yourself with. Like a Nora or a Pyrrha or somethin. Not tryna dictate anything, just my thoughts |
![]() ![]() ![]() ‘‘Twas very good hope you decide to do another Roman fic one day |