We want more. Great story. waiting for the next Chapter. Thank you

Great action chapter. Loved the mess hall scene and the intrigue of Chen and Erik. Can’t wait to see that hashed out. The final battle scene was a bit morbidly comedic. Great story so far. Fantastic writing.

Dang! Great chapter. I love how you captured the essence of the canon characters. Chucks character has a little more brass and Sarah’s a little more lady feelings. The arrogance of Beckman and her CIA counterpart is on full display kind of cringe worthy. Well done and great story so far.

MS5,
I’m not sure I’ve read this story before but man, after two chapters you’ve got me hooked. It’s been fantastic so far. I love the back story of Carina’s in this AU. I also love in the first chapter of Chuck growing a pair and taking action. I hope the following 24 chapters are as well written and as entertaining. Fantastic story!
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Great chapter! It masterfully sets up the action for the next one. On first reading I missed the significance of the snake as an avatar for the Intersect, but later on I remembered the shape of the Contessa's dagger. Based on the timing of the last few chapters I'm hoping that the next chapter is dropping some time within the next few weeks and I'm looking forward with great anticipation to see where you take it. I'm truly addicted to this story.

I must admit that I was initially hesitant to read this story. Might I say wayward even? The idea of Chuck becoming a legionnaire intrigued me, as I prefer the character’s intellectual and 'nerdy' qualities above others.

Nevertheless, I decided to give it a chance, and I was quickly captivated—I ended up reading all the chapters in just two days.

I eagerly anticipate what comes next, and I extend my sincere congratulations on crafting such an excellent and engaging story!

Mark Great chapter loved it. Holy cow that was alot to read Stephen and Mary Bartowski history was great . Chuck dream was crazy. Carina hooking up was interesting usually Chuck and Sarah doing the dancing. I am hoping the Bartowskis can save is son and really hope Sarah finally get her boyfriend back so the real romance can start

Sorry for the late review - this chapter's appearance was a very welcome surprise. I was hoping that by this time Chuck would be out and about ... but this was a fantastic chapter, especially in how it answers unresolved questions, such as Chuck's relation to the General's son, and sets up action in the near future of the type that I've been really looking forward to. I can barely wait until Chucks' ensnarement by the government and the methodology employed to control and eventually terminate him comes under scrutiny. Bryce may not have had a specific order to send Chuck the Intersect, but he was exercising his judgement while acting in his capacity as an agent of U.S. government. The government bears full responsibility in both his ensnaring and his treatment as an indentured servant, not to mention his all-but-literal orphan-hood. I'm also intrigued by the third "mind" in Chuck's brain. I'm guessing that it's a daemon that Orion had tucked away and activated for just this type of intervention. Homo Intersectus? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Well we know Ellie,Devon, and Morgan are around but now we know Mary and Stephen are trying to help Chuck. I would think that the President of France would talk to the U.S. President and tell him what the C.I.A. and N.A.S. was doing to Chuck. Especially the kill order and all the stuff Chuck has done to save the world. I wonder what Chuck is going to do next to save the world and I still want Sarah and Chuck to become a couple.

I was so happy to see a new chapter, can’t wait for Carina’s meeting with the President. I hope Beckman is in a lot of trouble after the meeting.

Wow great chapter. Glad Sean came to and saved them from operating on Chuck. Now the cat is out of the bag. What to tell and how much to tell and who knows what? Nice Stephen and Frost sightings. Great ending of the chapter with Carina speechless. Thank you.

These are some great updates. Thanks for sharing!

Wonderful new chapter but also a lot of open questions still, can’t wait to read the next
Thanks so far

Mark that was just a fantastic chapter. The writing was excellent. Can’t wait for more.

Hard to believe that the first 25 chapters were just Book 1 in this saga! So much more storytelling to come and this newest chapter already features a mythic beast. This has certainly been a wild ride with no end on the horizon.