It’s great we are back and with the same compelling intent and great writing.

Those who have or have had power always find a way to blame anyone other than themselves. Beckman was always somewhere on the edge, presenting a dichotomy that made no sense: for or against. This Beckman has unraveled in the way I always assumed. Undone by her own actions and single minded inability to think team. When will the rest of former team (not) intersect wake up. And who will step in her place.

I'm looking forward to Ellie coming to play a strong part with the intellect she clearly had. Intrigued by the maturity development of Morgan.

The broader plot development is also intriguing. You gave us clues all through book 1 that we go deeper in to sci fi fantasy and that promise is clear and present here.

Great characters and chapter. Thanks.

Go big or go home! What fun...What a great message for Beckman...And what a touching close to the chapter... Awesome job!

Damn Mark that was some good stuff. I’m intrigued with the nukes. I can’t wait for when Sarah and Chuck come together.

GREAT start to Book Two. Everyone who thought Chuck, Morgan, Ellie & Devon were under their control knows how BAD they screwed up and the scene in Beckman's office and the chaos in the Buy More would be as much fun to watch as it would have been to tape. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Superb start to Book 2 !

Everything coming to a head , love how you are writing all the webs leading to one point-Chuck. I’m guessing a Sarah and Morgan meeting to go with a Casey and Ilsa reunion. This story is off the charts.

End Origin story. Just outstanding. Thank you!

Great chapter, even though I love Sarah Walker, it was funny to see her get her ass kicked. Now hopefully somewhere down the line we get to see the new and improved Chuck kick Casey’s ass. I am loving this story and can’t wait for the next chapter.

Great ending to Book One. The circle sends to be getting tighter around Chuck. Sarah is getting closer and is more determined than ever to find him. Carina the voice of reason calming her down. Ilsa finding him what is she going to do? Very interesting.

Chuck obviously still having feelings for Sarah. I hope the team gets Ellie involved sooner than later on checking out Chuck with his changes. Awesome story and really looking forward to Book Two. Thank you.

A good end to Book One as we see what Sarah and Carina have been up to. They’ve caught up to Chuck’s recent trail so I’m thinking it won’t take them long to track him down. Looking forward to that reunion.

Outstanding story start. I wasn't sure about Chuck going to the Legion at first. But as the story went on, I got into it. Looking forward to more books. Great adventure and a nice development for our favorite nerd. Looking forward to more updates.

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Mark Murphy great chapter's I read both 17 and 18 great how Chuck is getting better with the intersect help and very stock of the man that saved him from the cia passed away very sad also very shocking of what happened at the dance club with the woman especially how strong I thought the feelings he had for Sarah very impressed and disappointed who easy Chuck was found because of the video from the club something the intersect didn't think about very disappointed and not surprised at Sarah reaction to her findings out also big slip with the legion keeping him hidden never thought night cute wow hopefully they figured out something before Beckham finds out

I was pleased to read that Chuck had not changed even with the enhancements. Sarah is a little disappointed so we will have to see how things fall out. Thanks for all your work and have a happy new.

Firstly with the end of book 1, i want to say congrats on putting out a mammoth story that obviously took a massive amount of work with very detailed research. I enjoyed it greatly and have already begun to reread it from the start. Cant wait for Book 2.

what a great chapter, really fantastic and I can’t await the next one
Thank you so much so far