Happy New Year. New chapter was a nice way to start. Lots going on, but the story is moving. Curioser and curioser. Always hopeful for an update.

Great chapter! Thanks for posting!

Wohoo! New chapter. :D

I'm starting to reread previous chapters to refresh my memory and rebuild context so I'll be ready for the next chapter when it drops. I like the long chapters - it's like reading a novel, and the quality of the writing and the breadth and inner consistancy of the plot makes the wait well worth it.

They are now French by spilled blood. Good for them.

I hope that this has not been abandoned since I am not certain as to the disposition of Chuck/Robi. Did he make it out and is he safe.

great story

Always a lot going on in your mega-chapters. Cliffhanger…please update as soon as you can.

I enjoyed this chapter even though it was a long one. I hope that you are still working on this story. I wonder if you might consider writing a crossover with the people who were morphed into the water people. It could be a story about how they help Chuck(Robie) helping Acquarman or in the this case Acquarwoman. It might generate some interest with some super hero fans. Don't know,just a thought.

Well we know Chuck will survive and I think Sean will also. I'm glad we found out about Sean's backstory and what happened. Hopefully this will help Chuck tell Sean about Sarah and maybe give them a chance (Charah) ;). Great job and great chapter. I hope we get another chapter soon.

Awesome chapter! I see a french-led intersect operation in our immediate future. Can't wait!

Hi, Another great chapter. Keep up the good work. looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Hard to believe that we are coming up to the one year anniversary of the first chapter publication of this colossal story. It has certainly been an imaginative ride, and it seems to have room for much more plot line. Hopefully some of that includes Sarah and Chuck getting another chance to work things out. But for now, this has been a heckuva journey!

Great chapter, well worth the wait. Can't wait to see whats up next for Chuck and Sean.

Mark that was a very well written chapter. This last chapter with huminoid creachers totally blew my mind. Sorry for my spelling. Can’t wait for the next chapter.