Another good story dead.

Hope the author is ok.

Haven't read the chapter yet but thank you for your service and hope all goes well!

Another issue with the "mature at 16" unless her birth occurred at midnight ot wouldn't be her mature enough time.

It's impossible for Hermione to be younger than Harry and still be in the same year group. Being younger than Harry means being the same age as Ginevra, Luna, and Colin.

An interesting story so far, and I do hope you get a chance to return to it. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Walburga Black.

Excellent story - so different from the usual.
Also one of the VERY few that progress after Voldemort's death.
The update date plus the comment on Iraq leads to unfortunate possibilities. Please deny!

Lucuis is probably thinking he has them right where he wants them as he hangs dead

I honestly wish that this had continued..
This is one of the most amazing and well written stories I’ve seen in ages.

Oh my love and heart.

This was wild journey and I am missing next chapter.
Only thing I want to say as negative is that there were times when you forgot to mark "someone talking" correctly and just wrote straight without using (") mark.

And I understand that people try to tell you how to write, but the story is your adaptation from Orginal it is a Fanfic and that allows you to make all the changes that is needed to change the story. Keep going.

Salut, j'espère que tout va bien pour toi, je voulait savoir s'il y aura une suite à cette histoire, je l'aime beaucoup... a plus... peut-être
Si jamais tu lis cette review : im french and i write in my native language
J'espère vraiment vraiment que tu vas bien... c'est très inquiète le mot de la fin, sachant que tu n'as pas réécrit derrière, après tu n'as peut-être plus envie d'écrire cette histoire, mais je pense que tu devrait au moins nous dire si tu vas bien et si tu compte continuer que l'instant attende pas pour rien, si tu ne nous envoie rien tout le monde va penser que tu es mort, et clairement c'est ce que je pense aussi...

Ooh, loved the sweating blood bit.

At first I didn't understand what Harry meant when he said letting others kill for them until I read the last part, where it turns out that it was actually the pathologist who killed Nott, and I couldn't stop laughing, that was just genius.

The amount of shorter chapter plus the increase stupidity of saving a rapist is enough to declare this as a full of shit6 story

very e