|Reviews for The Fourth Power|
| DaveC chapter 5 . 7/5
Don't see any reason for the map to be even in this story. Chapters are too small story going too quickly
| DaveC chapter 16 . 5/23
| DaveC chapter 13 . 5/23
All you chapters are short
| DaveC chapter 8 . 5/23
Why not kill him there in Stonehenge while he was weak
| DaveC chapter 1 . 5/23
Yea looking good
| firedawg chapter 1 . 4/17
Great start Lucy gets jis at the beginning. Well done.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/29
| vmcclure2 chapter 13 . 3/16
On a scale of 1-10 Dumbledore & Severus Snape have already gone off the charts in Harry's untrustworthy books, yet the Headmaster is considering using veritaserum on Harry just to get who trained Harry & Hermione? Then again even if veritaserum is okayed with so few people in the Wizarding World that Harry trusts who would be the administrator of it?
| vmcclure2 chapter 11 . 3/16
Something tells me what Dumbledore thinks of as simple matter of getting Ronald Weasley to inveigle where Harry received his training is going to blow up in his face along with a friendship between two boys that just barely mended after the first task in their fourth year. Besides, isn't Dumbledore getting sidetracked from what's truly important in wartime-like trying to tie up known deatheater finances so Voldy can't use them, or using the Order to track down his horcruxes if any, something truly useful to Harry rather than tying him up in knots.
| vmcclure2 chapter 7 . 3/15
Okay, why should the Order members be afraid, the Dragon Circle (Harry's & Hermione's alter egos) are only after L. V's Inner Circle unless they all have something in their past they wouldn't want the Dragon Circle to use against them. Hmm?
| DaveC chapter 19 . 3/13
A peeping Tom...really ?...lol
| DaveC chapter 1 . 3/13
Interesting so far
| NoxauraCille chapter 5 . 2/6
Thank goodness. You finally ended my torm-er, I mean...
| Milagro626 chapter 28 . 1/29
I hope that you are safe and sound from your trip in Iraq. Have you finished the last chapters? Great fic. Great Author!
| a1993 chapter 28 . 10/24/2015
Shame that this doesnt seem like it will be continued