Wow this is the best story ive read so far after the real Order of the Phoenix it all is awsome and i love H/Hr. Harry is cool in here and him learning all of these new things can't wait till he has a meeting with some death eater or somethig. Can't wait till you update and can't wait till Harry and Hermione get serious...

poor confused Harry! and the love triangle begins.

i can't decide whether i think that the thing with the goblin was good (the wizarding hero trusts us; there's no reason not to stay on this side) or bad (ha! the idiot trusts us, let's screw him out of a lot of money), but i'm sure it'll be revealed soon enough.

this is a fantastic story, it's my absolute favorite on the site. can't wait for the next chapter!

I know in your bio you solemnly swear not to have Hermoine fall for Ron, I sure hope you stick to that, I really can't see that logically happening. The way they fight, it's not 'foreplay' its a clash of personalities.

Also though I loved the Goblin part. I liked how'd the goblin leaned forward and said "Do you trust us?" not do you trust 'me' but 'us' as in the Goblins. I think this was really cool, like this could sway the goblins to help Harry later.

At least now with Harry being a partner in W, he'll have money going into his account and not just coming out. I hope to see some H/Hr resolution to the kiss. Like 'let's see how it goes' or something, and Ron can sod off the slacker.

Canon-like characterizations! Mischievous banter between Harry and the Twins, in the shop and during the party. Moody is the ever vigilant auror. Tonks is like an older sister who's young enough to tease and understand the teenagers. Lupin and Bill are protective of Harry.

It was also realistic for Harry and Hermione to feel awkward around each other. (Same for Ron and Hermione, for that matter.) Harry is a git for making fun of Hermione's choice of book, but it was still sweet of him to get it for her.

You obviously put a lot of thought into explaining these spells. Not many writers bother to do that. I appreciate your effort.

Waiting for Chapter 16 - and more H/H fluff

Great story so far. It really has to be one of the best new fanfics I have read in last month and I have read quite a bit of them lately. Good work I look forward to next chapter.

I can see you leaning towards a H/Hr ship. Though after reading so many fan fictions H/Hr and H/G stories have gotten really old and over done. Its gotten so bad I refuse to even start a new fanfiction if it clames to be a H/G fic.

But good going once more.

I like this story very much-just caught on to it. I think I like the part with the goblin the best-Harry's taking an enormous leap of faith in trusting him and the goblin no doubt feels honored by it. I'd love to this as a catalyst for improved goblin-wizard relations and the possible impetus for the goblins' decision on which side to choose in the upcoming conflict. Maybe I'm weird for seeing that moment as the best in this chapter, but I guess I'm just a sucker for "old" ideas like honor and duty.

Oh

Good chappy... Post again soo PLEASE!

I don't think I can handle it if there wasn't an update REALLY soon.

Just one thing... What was the deal with the goblin actually SMILING? You aren't gonna have them got Harry as a spokesperson for them too are ya?

Neways, looking forward to the next chapter..

~Ror

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What a fantastic story. It is so fun to read. You do a great job of capturing the spirit of each of the characters. Please keep updating.

Thank you for sharing your story and talent with me.

oh... its a love triangle... Rons going to be horrible, isn't he? Oh, poor Harry... And poor Ron... I just can't see how this is going to work out for the better... The twins wre very in charecter by the way, good job! I have the hardest time writing them well... Anyway, keep up the excellent work!

Can't wait for the next chapter yp cme up!

Love your fic!

I loved the chapter!

What the hell is going on, please no love triangles those are annoying, always thought ron probably had a crush on hermione, but don't think she returns the feelings, excepct maybe he like a brother, i always fight with my brother, keep this up :-]

I love you philosophy on shipping! I totally agree. You've done a good job keeping the characters in canon! Keep up the good work! And now, without further interuption, I;m going to continue reading your fic!

Brilliant... absolutely good! I cant wait till the next chapter! pls pls pls pls write them soon! I dont mind if it has grammar mistakes... i dont really bloody care! Lolz

Neway... Luv the scene with the twins, they're absolutely funny! Lolz...and i do hope that hermione doesn't fancy ron... cuz then poor harry!

Cheers!

Love the new chapter. I'm assuming that since the next one was cut out of the 15th, it'll be out soon, right? Right? *gets on his knees* Please! I'm begging you! I'll do anything!