I cannot believe that Harry got 1 outstanding and 2 Exceeds Expectations on Potions! The sky just dropped, the imposible happened! SNape has gone crazy! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!

Just kidding. That was a nice loop you tossed into the story. Can't wait for more, update soon.

I like this story. Its great and Harry feels like the real Harry.

The last chapter is really good, but my favourite is the one of the lesson with Shacklebolt, I liked the way Harry dueled him...it seems truth, because therere a lot of fics where Harry is as good as Voldemort himself with only three weeks of training...

Update soon,please!

I just discovered your story today and i think its awesome. I am also very pleased to see that you already have 10 chapters up over the course of a little over two weeks. I hope that you will continue this pattern. I love the developing relationships between Harry and Dumbledore & Harry and Lupin too. Dumbledore and Harry deciding to share the burden together; that scene was really brilliant, very touching. Update Soon!

wow...i REALLY love this fic! Your fic is definitely one of the best fics out there. Your story line is very pausible and the dialogue is very in character. Its obvious that you've put a lot of thought and careful planning that has made this fic all the better. I love your "Rowling-esque" style of writing. It really seems like it could be the sixth book of the series. Also, props on giving Harry a lot of emotion and allowing him to cry and grieve. I like the fact how you've let Sirius' death finally catch up the Harry, something that he will need to accept in order to be stronger.

Hmm..for pain what about the basilisk piercing his arm? i would think that would be *quite* painful.

Great but please no harry/tonks. tonks is much too old for him..even if she is "young"

Really excellent story written in true Rowling style! D

Great story! I wonder what Dumbledore will say at the use of one of the unforgivables.

aw... that's sad. good story so far, but please try not to make this a harry/hermione fic, or at least not right away. keep writtin', and update as soon as you can!

-fan

that was a very intense chapter, keep up the great work.

i really like this story! and it's great how harry is so in characther. it really feels like him and not some other harry charather if you know what i mean. before ootp harry didn't really have all the much emotion, he did what the hero was expected to do but in ootp he started to question and his emotions became evident. i'm really glad that you continued this on in your story! i can't wait to read the rest! keep up the good writing! and update often! lol i really hate having to wait for the next chapter, hopefully i'll finnish your story tonight. neways must finish reading! -Tas

great story so far D

you said its about a sixteen year old boy, you therefore imply that harry is a 'normal' 16 y/o boy... do u really think that he's normal or is it just an excuse to get out of wrighting things u dont want to

what shall dumbledore say about harrys use of an unforgivabol curse i wonder? you can do so many things with were you have left off keep going

This is an excellent story... and very believeable and I feel as though it is the real sixth book in the making. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more!