Wow.
Incredible story.
Thank you for sharing it with us.

What happened to Tats here? No whimsy, just straight up life destruction. Shame she can't help UNK with S9.

Instead of constantly rolling snake eyes, UNK should be steamrolling those jerks.

It's rare for someone to vibe with Armsmaster on his own wavelength. Greg is doing good. Not well, Annette, GOOD.

i can't help but hear ironmouse's voice when reading this ironmouse

this is fantastic, all the kudos

Well that was disappointing. The frist time Greg is proactive and you show nothing of it.

This is a good example of why being reactive is bad. Sure being there to help after bad stuff happens is heroic but its inheritly flawed. The 9 are a perfect example of people that should be hunted nonstop

Wow, I thought his dad was bad but his mom is a complete bitch.

Wasn't it previously shown that Sophia is slower than Greg? When ahe was stalking him she was losing him due to being unable to keep up. Its minor plothole but the fact its a important detail of their relationship makes it a glaring one.

That and I hate inconsistencies.

So that's why Greg has such a fucked up worldview. At least his makes sense, the whole "sacrifice everything to be a hero" mentality is so toxic that it makes sense he got it from being neglected.

I enjoy your writing and have for quite a long time. This one makes me happiest to reread.

That was very touching and well written. Well done.

butterfly effect for the win

this is amazing

Man, this story was great. Really entertaining from beginning to end.
And i am glad you went with this ending instead of the other one.
I also really enjoy the theme of how his actions actually created waves that not only affected the events directly, but also affected the people.
Honestly, one of my favorite Worm fics.