|Reviews for He Wanted Her to Live|
| lia.a.karas chapter 4 . 9/3/2016
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/14/2015
Sounds a bit much like prostitution.
| Carla Balsinha chapter 4 . 9/5/2011
I enjoyed so much your story,i imagine easly this two together!
she have evrything to do with him!
| shoestring potato chapter 4 . 12/6/2010
*pumps fist to the air*
I love your writing. You certainly are a gift to the world of fiction. Do write more. SSHG for life! :)
| NoahIrene chapter 4 . 11/4/2009
| sbrande chapter 4 . 10/30/2005
Excellent! Another brilliant story..
Thanks for sharing it...
| Amr chapter 4 . 2/17/2005
I've just read this along with a lot of your other fics, and I think it's among the best. You could leave it here (as I suppose you've done, since there hasn't even been a review for the last 8 months or so), but it would be nice to tie it back with the first chapter somehow. That, by the way, was unbelievably brilliant-his gentleness to her then is really moving. The gentleness is picked up again in this chapter, but his insecurity is still a little bit there. It might be nice if you could somehow recapture the more confident, open caring of the first chapter at a later period in their relationship. Childbirth, maybe, or much, much later, after a long marriage, as one of them is dying? I'll check again. I love your stuff. So nice to find an author who writes grammatically and with such a fine eye for telling detail and natural dialogue.
| DragonMasterKris chapter 4 . 6/7/2004
Wow, Dude this was so great! I hope this isn't the end!
| Amber chapter 4 . 5/25/2004
Wow, what an ending! One of your trademark emosional ending that always leave the reader wanting more. You're a grate writer you know. I love your work...
| Amber chapter 2 . 5/24/2004
Exelant...Wonderful...intierly in chearictor...
That is, in my openion, exactly how JK would have had him react..."-and there is no higher prase I can give you then that-" -Albus Dumbesdor
| Amber chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
It wasn't OoC, not in my openion. She was dieing after all. I would have been suprised if he had acted diffrently. Glad you decided to write more. Will you continue with "Out of Time?" Hope you update it soon...
| Serendipity chapter 4 . 5/20/2004
Just wanted to say that I really love all your storys, they just have this bitter sweet (fluffy and sad, but fluff with a meaning, not just declarations of love randomly thrown together, more like subtle little messages of ever lasting love - hopeless romantic here) feeling to them (a happy ending). Uhm, yeah, and : please keep writing a lot more, and maybe some sequels?
| caligirl1 chapter 4 . 9/1/2003
Your stories are lovely, you apologize kind of for making this fluffy, but it's a logical kind of fluff considering what they've been through. (Also, I live in L.A. and I like the fact that it seems to rain a lot in your world...) Write more, write more!
| Taya chapter 4 . 8/30/2003
OOh...I like, I like. It's very sweet and nice and...I like it!
| someone28 chapter 4 . 8/22/2003