Reviews for Turmoil |
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yubel the ultimate nightmare chapter 3 . 12/30/2020 Great job! Although, you don't tip people in England. And yeah, the rush hour is a pain in the ass, it's usually around 17:00. |
the17thmuse chapter 19 . 6/13/2017 Wow. Not for lack of epic final showdowns and stuff. But just, wow. |
Fi Suki Saki chapter 19 . 9/20/2013 #dumbstruck #speechless That's... Something... #blinked The ending... |
Mashy-Gaara4life chapter 19 . 2/1/2010 What? Only 19? I expect something more epic. But this is quite epic too. Do u have any sequel of this? |
Mashy-Gaara4life chapter 1 . 2/1/2010 I really hope that Dumbledore would be very much fascinated by Kaiba's reincarnation story. |
insertappropropriatenamehere chapter 19 . 11/16/2009 :D Yes, Kaiba does seem like that kind of douchebag. |
hausos-writing chapter 19 . 5/10/2009 This story is great! While it would have been incredibly nice for you to actually finish the story itself, this is just perfect. Lovely lovely lovely lovely! I would say 'update soon' but I cannot, in this case. Just know that this story is awesome. |
TheBlackPheonixNightengaleFudo chapter 19 . 2/21/2009 cool, it was really good! |
Vampiric Dragonrider chapter 3 . 2/1/2009 Very clearly the best YGO/HP crossover on the entire net. And, it's centered almost entirely on Kaiba! X3 |
Vampiric Dragonrider chapter 2 . 2/1/2009 Yay! Part of why I like Kaiba so much is the dragons, cuz those still are my favorite mystical creature... Still brilliant, but also still with some spelling errors. I'll let them slide from now on, though, to spare you. |
Vampiric Dragonrider chapter 1 . 2/1/2009 M, I love it. It sounds like an official, and most of the fanfiction nowadays lack that. Just a couple spelling and grammar errors: Appirition is actually Apparation, and you should have used "acceptance" instead of "expectance" in the first part. Also, when someone is speaking, but you skip a line and the same person is still speaking, you drop the last " of the first sentence. for example:"...I have found you guilty. "Now, I'm sure..." But I'm also a very picky reader. Blame my dad XD |
Namesake chapter 11 . 1/17/2009 I just find your latin denomination for Kuribou to be most amusing: an Egyptian Dustbunny. I can't wait to finish reading your story. It's very amusing. |
Sam Harper chapter 19 . 7/16/2008 Hmm, this was an interesting fanfic. It was mostly Seto based wich was diferent for me,but all in all still good! |
EdElricFan1001 chapter 19 . 11/29/2007 I really enjoyed this story, and it's one of the better well-written ones and actually had a plot. Everyone was in cahracter and there were a lot of twists in the story. I love the ending of the Epilogue. It ended almost like a movie would and I think that it's brilliant that you kept Kaiba's wand! Although I really wish you would have finished this, it was really good! EdElricFan1001 |
FreakNo94 chapter 19 . 10/20/2007 Oh that was nice... though the ending part was a bit fast. ryou's british, so bakura should be able to speak english. and isn't anzu and tea the same person? |