Reviews for A unexpected deal
Asherc0re chapter 20 . 5/1
AlbinoWolf37 chapter 7 . 4/5
i absolutely adore Alastor's character! you did a wonderful job with him and i really enjoy this story so far!
KyloRen'sgirl213 chapter 1 . 3/20
Loving this very very much
Guest chapter 28 . 2/23
This was amazing! Even if it is the last chapter or not I've binged the whole thing in one night and I adore it! Your skill for writing is amazing, I enjoyed every bit. Especially your take on alastor!
Aiko Miyamoto chapter 22 . 2/19
You are really keeping up with updating this story so frequently! And I'm definitely on here too much lately, I catch each update almost as soon as you post the next chapters lol. The first chapter having an updated list of the NSFW chapters is a nice touch. For those who like the slowburn and those that want the smüt, it's so well balanced. And yoooo chapter 22 the kitchen scene sent meeeee . g*ddamn alastor, thank you lending a hand.
Aiko Miyamoto chapter 20 . 2/17
Ahhhh, such lovely and fitting advice, and totally in character-loved this chapter for Husker and Angel! Overall I love this OC, too. I'm gripped to see how this little not-exchange will go!
xXxKatsumiHimixXx chapter 19 . 2/16
Ooohhh she said the l word!? What will happen now!? I would have loved to see what he was thinking when she said that!
Aiko Miyamoto chapter 18 . 2/15
Hands down my favorite story here so far! I always figured Alastor would be difficult to write for, but youre doing an AMAZING job. So witty and nothing is too over the top. I can certainly hear his voice and see him perfectly fitting in with how you wrote him! I always pictured him being kind of bloodlusty too, lol so I was kicking my feet a lot of time while reading. I can't wait to read more!
ENBDemon chapter 16 . 2/15
i enjoyed this. i love the way you built up their relationship. feels very genuine and unique. and all of the situations between them feel natural. wonderful fic. can't wait for more.
Kayleigh.elizabeth chapter 16 . 2/15
I am HOOKED on this story! Very well done. Cant wait to see whats next. Im hoping they become such a power couple and takes her soul! I love the submission and unwavering loyalty she gives him.
xXxKatsumiHimixXx chapter 10 . 2/9
YYYEESSS SHE MADE A DEAL!? another chapter please!
lemonbreadboi1 chapter 10 . 2/9
better than most fanfiction i've read
xXxKatsumiHimixXx chapter 8 . 2/7
I'm enjoying this! i can't wait to read more! Thanks for uploading!
Velixare chapter 7 . 2/7
You've got me hooked on the story. Gonna be neat seeing how it goes
KaseyKay92 chapter 6 . 2/6
Well, it’s good to know that Alastor doesn’t bottle up his emotions. A moment of silence, for the poor, unfortunate souls that are in his way *silence* …well that was nice *smiley face* out of curiosity do you plan on following the outline of the episodes?
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