Reviews for A Certain Amount of Sense
Jessicat1982 chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
you're off to a fantastic start. I can't wait to see what happens next. if you're really looking for a beta reader, you might want to try posting your request on the WIKTT but I don't really think you need one so far. your story flows very nicely and I was unable to discern any spelling or grammatical errors..of course, I may not be the best person to be checking these things.

looking forward to your next chapter.
Jax1 chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
Great idea, and even though you've only posted one chapter, it looks like your characterisation is just as good.

Can't wait to read more chapters!
jasmine6 chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
It's a great start. I can't wait to see where you take it. Keep up the good work.
becka5 chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
An interesting beginning!
Romm chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
Um, cool, but what's going on? Like what's the plan? For Hermione to learn Occlumency then teach it to Harry?
RainDance3 chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
oh please write more soon!
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