Never seen lesbian Daphne before, I think that's a neat choice and it fits well with how fandom characterizes her

thw school had been taking security much, much more seriously after sirius 'kidnapped, "Harry, so why no anti portkey wards? I'm glad the whole thing is dealt with, but it seems like it shouldn't have even happened with the adults supposedly taking everything security related seriously?

i really don't see harrys big hangup with the way he is winning so far. he KNOWS with 100% certainty that the other champions are also cheating yes?

...all he hadto do was call his house elves...

unfair double standards aside, harru shouldnt get in any trouble for protecting a dog and stunning a criminal.

rather unfair that harry was denied..

well i can never think of astoria without thinking of jer as bacongirl lol

Thanks for the story! It was very enjoyable read!

Great story. Well writing, and interesting pairing

Right after Harry showed he can summon Astoria, Tom decides kidnapping her is best idea.

Binged this all in one go, such a cute story, thank you for writing this!

Hey, that was pretty good.

This is adorable, thank you. I appreciate a good story that puts a smile on my face.

Very well done; I love your characterizations and the bit about Ron catching onto stuff faster than Harry and Hermione was amazing. I don't think I've ever seen anyone pull that off.

A well written and imaginative story. I really enjoyed it and the way you allowed Harry to win the contest. I also liked the elvish interactions particularly Kreacher but also the Hogwarts elves. Willa and Max were fun too. Thank you for sharing your story