Loving the story, hope you update again soon.

I love this story and I hope you keep up the good work!

Peace for all also wonder how much those catsuits cost?

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Opaque: adjective
not able to be seen through; not transparent.
"The windows were opaque with steam."

Your narration about Tali's visor was confusing.

Excellent update

great chapter!

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Hmm wonder what would happen if harry adopted Jack.

So it sound like cerberus catch jack and did stuff to her or maybe she never escape

Awesome work please continue the story it's incredible

Excellent update

I love this story and I look forward to reading the next chapter.

i'm greatly enjoying this story, sorry i didn't find it sooner. i love the levity harry brings even as cannon progressions slowly dies a mostly unmourned death.

please updste when u can thsnks for the great story. sory my dislexia kicking in.