Reviews for A Stay of Execution |
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![]() ![]() I really hope you update this story soon. This is one of my favorite stories. |
![]() ![]() Please update this amazing story soon. |
![]() ![]() Esto simplemente mejora con cada capitulo |
![]() ![]() ![]() man i am loving this story good chapter hope naruto gets with uriel also hope to see the helluva boss gang karlach was a great surprise love her to death |
![]() ![]() ![]() Testing. 1, 2, 3. Does this come up? |
![]() ![]() As always looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Minor heads up. The names of the Carmine girls are Clara and Odette. Otherwise, this has been fun so far. |
![]() ![]() Автор а когда продолжение будет? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Karlach?! LET'S FUCKING GO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start! |
![]() ![]() Me gustó buen capítulo |
![]() ![]() For the love of God English is not that fucking hard. The phrase you're looking for is "used sex toy" not "used UP sex toy". Used up in this way doesn't make any sense AT ALL. Also a dish washer is the CORRECT place to put used sex toys that you aren't washing by hand you ridiculous fucking child. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Leviathans description reminds me a bit of Savage Deviljho. |
![]() ![]() I like the story. I would actually like to see the female version of this one honestly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha! Fantastic fic. Binged it last night, but coming back to comment tonight. Love the pairings being set up and the different dynamics of them. Not just Naruto either. Kurama getting action like that is just hilarious. Plus the way putting an ability like sage mode in hell and how it would impact Naruto. Love that impulsive and almost hormonal at times side getting shown off. Great story and looking forward to more. Also loved giving Michelle a hint of that lovely 50K softcore music number for Naruto and the reference to charlie doing the same in the past. Keep up the great work! Literally only complaint is the story felt a bit "derailed" by the sudden jump into Jesus talk a bit ago. Not against that in itself, especially cause it would make sense for angel or someone to ask, just felt like leaving it open ended for guessing/reader interpretation instead of giving a straight answer would have felt more natural. Like Rick Riordan did, or like you did with God vacationing. Not that big a deal tbh, just that, as that's basically the only part of the fic that hasn't constantly felt like it's flowing from scene to scene, chapter to chapter, (or funny/exciting in it's chaos to disrupt that for a bit) it's the only constructive criticism I *can* give. Still seriously looking forward to seeing more of this and more embarrassed people stuck listening to Naruto make lady's nights. Haha. |