Reviews for A Stay of Execution
DaftMerc39 chapter 6 . 6/9/2024
Great chapter.

This Karlach from Baldur's Gate 3 the Tiefling Barbarian I think I like her. There's a crossover Naruto x Baldur's Gate 3 stories.

Let me guess Ana and Naruto did lemon time together, nice. Ana is twerking on Naruto oh she's a naughty sinner girl, wonder where she learned how to twerk, from those hip hop artists, music, and videos trying to impress and tease Naruto and Michelle. Lets hope the women in Naruto's harem from the other Hazbin Hotel x Helluva Boss x Naruto crossovers better not be interested in twerking for him fun time, Sera and Emily better not look it up lol.

Naruto in the Lust Ring would be crazy for him to go in heat frenzy fox and turn Succubus, Tieflings, Hellhounds, Baphomets, Possessors, Ars Goetia, and other races from the seven rings on for more lustful.

What about Beelzebub was she also had a name like Bael would she be like the first Ars Goetia and powerful than Paimon in King rank. Unless if Bael was a father of Beelzebub just like that DeviantArt SavvySketches03 of King Bael and Bee's Mom.

That line Stolas said to Stella is great I pictured that line with Naruto to say that to any random women who he doesn't like and the ones who give Naruto a best lemon scene like Loona, Verosika, and any female characters. And Naruto would said to Sera "Sorry I F*%ked Emily."

What about Heaven population don't they have overpopulation too.

Gabriel a prankster in heaven. Least Naruto didn't know if Gabriel is a prankster just like him when he was young. Sera got prank by Gabriel lol, I would bet if Naruto prank Sera harmless like her clothes got wet and revealing lol.

Wish if Emily would sneak out of Heaven go to the living in human disguise. I would picture her go to the Elemental Nations, meet Naruto first time like her and him were young become friends, and she had a secret crush on him in different crossovers.

Glad that Adam got scared lol.

First Verosika and now Karlach are Blitzø's Ex's. Karlach is a Imp, wow I didn't notice wonder Tieflings are sub race from Imps but only get big. Least Naruto didn't pass by Verosika and her crew to go into heat.

Lol Vaggie regrets to be trained by Naruto, she'll be sore.

What!? Charlie has a half-sister, her name is Aurora. Oh real funny Lucifer try to make it up to break the ice, jerk.

I'm guessing Michelle has the I don't know lust withdrawal for staying Heaven and not with Naruto, just like Ryuk wants apples from Death Note. Oh boy now Michelle is having a threesome. Charlie is going to having a trouble to ignore what is going to happened again lol, she want her mom back lol.

Naruto "The Angelslayer", Superior. Adam "The Acornmaster", and Valentino, Inferior.

Lol Velvette is still got the red mark bruises on her butt lol reminds me of an anime called Maou-sama Retry where main protagonist give the Holy Maiden spanking lol. Wish the video wasn't taken down by Vox if it was Vox proof. Is Velvette a Tsundere, and her kink is getting spanked. I bet everyone in Hell got the video downloaded and do drawing of her getting spanked from Naruto.

Valentino and the Vees will pay for what they did to those souls have been contacted by them and they have Molly. They better not harm her and especially not hurting Purple Hound Lady from HH Ep Masquerade, Dia, and Summer or there will be CARNAGE!

Wait War? As in the one on YouTube of War Hazbin Hotel Comic Dub videos. I bet she's a Yandere type but noooo way she ain't going to be near by Naruto. For a minute there the angels blood was blue but now it's gold.

Valentino is worst than Volt from Kuroinu Kedakaki Seijo wa Hakudaku ni Somaru for forcing lust, I don't wanna imagine those two work together for Volt's stupid sick twisted empire sex, but I pictured Naruto would kill those two in a crossovers Naruto x Kuroinu x Helluva Boss x Hazbin Hotel and Naruto rule as Emperor of Eostia.
jeremiahkelley93 chapter 6 . 6/9/2024
Great chapter.
merendinoemiliano chapter 6 . 6/9/2024
Adorable and fun chapter
WeAreVenom5 chapter 6 . 6/9/2024
Cool to see Helluva Boss in the this story too!
Blaal chapter 4 . 6/9/2024
Sorry, late night reading led to the previous review. I still agree with it, but I also really enjoy the way the story is going.
AerosDragonewt99 chapter 6 . 6/9/2024
Finally! A new update! It is a great story, and in interesting direction you are going in. I can’t wait for the next update, hopefully soon! If Fanfiction doesn’t get any better, then why not post somewhere else like AO3?
iloveM.A.D.B chapter 6 . 6/9/2024
I don't do this very often because I'm more of the mindset of I would rather say nothing if I don't have anything of value to input for the betterment of the author or the story. But I really have to praise you on your story. It's funny; you don't really rely on the show. You use the show as scaffolding and as a foundation, but you don't serenade us with a rehashing just with the addition of Naruto. You do something interesting here. While at some points the characters are flanderized in some scenes or aspects, it works with the characters you use and the stories you use. You don't need an overly serious badass all the time Naruto because that's not who Naruto is, no matter how you spin it. Like let's take your first chapter, or should I say the prologue, after Naruto's done killing, he makes certain that people in his proximity are all right. He even cracks jokes that he would make. He messes up. He's not just the copied "Hey, it's Naruto because he likes Ramen" or "Hey, it's Naruto because he likes orange." You give these characters a sense of humanity, as counterproductive as that is, because you know the story set in hell, which is something that the "Hazbin Hotel" series relies heavily on, grounding their characters. That's what acting is. That's what storytelling is. If you're not an actor, you may not understand, but most acting teachers are actors will say acting is just living truthfully in imaginary circumstances. The same goes with a story, and the second you throw out the humanity or the human aspects, no matter how powerful the character is, that's when the story becomes bad. It doesn't matter if you have good grammar. It doesn't matter if it flows. Even Superman or Saitama have their vices. For Superman, it's he can barely be touched physically, but emotionally he is weak. A man who can hold up the world be attacked by every possible thing from every possible timeline possible at the same exact time and continue smiling. But if you put this man under emotional turmoil, he doesn't know how to handle it because he's strong physically, not emotionally. Well, One Punch Man, on the other hand, seems nonchalant, but the human aspect of his character comes with how he's the most powerful thing but he can't really use his powers on anything. It's like if you wish to have superpowers and no one else did, you would get bored. The superpowers would become mundane. You have no bad guys to stop, and the ones you do have to stop don't really pose a threat. And even within your relationships, there's a justifiable reason for why these people like Naruto. Number one, you can't just throw women at Naruto because he's in hell and vices, but you keep true to who Naruto is and sets it up in a way where he wants to know these women. He wants to understand these women, and these women want to understand him and show him parts of themselves besides "I love you unconditionally," even though that is still an aspect. You keep these women in your story as women, as people, not just props. Sorry for the long review. Thank you so much for writing this story. I hope you continue to find enjoyment from it. I hope you continue to come up with great ideas. Just thank you.
Folla burros chapter 6 . 6/9/2024
Muy bien sigue asi
Guest chapter 6 . 6/9/2024
is War inspired by Orin from Baldur's gate 3? I distinctly remember her dialogue from this chapter in a scene with her and Ghortash whilst he gets his portrait painted
TheSinofPride0 chapter 6 . 6/9/2024
I love the chapter, and I can not wait to read more. By any chance, will Loona join this version of Naruto's menagerie?
freedomringer chapter 6 . 6/9/2024
Yay! Moar
SixStringBass chapter 6 . 6/8/2024
LET'S GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOI'M UP THERE WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Spellbat chapter 6 . 6/8/2024
Great chapter. Honestly, wasn't expecting the sex lesson but thanks... I guess. Also, no ideo who War is. Also, what was the reference for the song in the last chapter?
sniperbro1998 chapter 6 . 6/8/2024
Michelle is great and i want to know what War did to Adam and Lute.
Pathfinder097 chapter 6 . 6/8/2024
Dude lol why you tormenting poor Charlie?
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