Reviews for A Proper Heir |
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![]() ![]() ![]() please update. |
![]() ![]() Please update soon the suspense is killing me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think its great idea for a what if of harry potter, i’ll be waiting for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story I hope you update it soon |
![]() ![]() Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good so far. Can’t wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() are you going to do more |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude, there's no way harry would be 5'10" at 11 years old |
![]() ![]() Just... The idea was great but.. a few things make this fanfiction not so interesting anymore. like the idea of a 'coven' around Harry and several other ideas. just why? Why put Harry around girls? This suggests there will be a harem. and I hate it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so far and I hope you keep up the good work and update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now this is how you start a story and lay the ground work! Great work! ~Ryan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man hope to see a update soon on the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next |