A very good emotional story. Having Chu-Chu as someone already interested in Suletta is an unique choice that like the more I think on it. Though the thought of the breakup of MioSule as permanent is distressing, I liked how yóu wrote the final scene. Thank you.
Jay

This is a great idea for what might have happened between Miorine and Chuchu after Miorine publicly breaks her engagement to Suletta. I can really see Chuchu doing something like that. I particularly liked how with just a couple of choice words Chuchu both confessed her feelings and threw down the gauntlet to Miorine.

I can just picture the next scene starting with Guel saying "Miorine, you look like shit..."