|Reviews for Through Dreams and Despair|
| awesome-o-pants3000 chapter 13 . 12/28/2007
ive recently watched legend..and just recently got hooked on fan fiction. please..this is a really terrific awesome story, and i can tell by the notes at the end that you not reliable for time...BUT ITS BEEN THREE YEARS. update it...my hope in you has not yet dulled.
| Ayehli chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
I have a soft spot for Legend and the whole innocence-tempted-by-evil thing, and I stumbled upon this site while indulging in that little guilty pleasure-this story is really quite good and I immensely enjoyed reading it and re-living all my childhood memories of Legend and the possible fan fiction it inspired in my head. Though it looks like it's been a few years since the last update I for one would be very grateful if you'd finish it, even if you've long since moved on to other things.
| QS chapter 13 . 6/22/2007
You've made it pretty obvious the father is Darkness. Continue!
| a chapter 13 . 3/1/2007
said you wouldn't abandon it. even a simple ending is enough.
so many fanfics, no one cares if they live or die. But not this one. it's too nice to leave undone.
| Amanda chapter 13 . 2/19/2007
We need a Chapter 14!
I wanna know if Gump comes back, lol!
I love your story, I can't wait until it's finished :D.
| ladyleahrbloom chapter 13 . 9/17/2006
I love this story! I wish the chapters were a bit longer, I adore long chapters!
Only prob I had was that you used the word "Okay." No one in that time period would have used that, nor would they know what it meant.
Again, more please. ;) Leah.
| evildolly chapter 13 . 6/28/2006
please...for the love of all fandom...UPDATE THIS STORY! I'll give you a cookie )
| ByrdWings chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
I have been a fan of the movie Legend since it came out. I happened to see there was a spot of fanfiction for this movie, randomly selected your name and dove into this magnificent story. It seems you have picked up where the movie left off, no this is the real story to the movie, for me. I am at the beginning of Ch.10, awesome. You paint a very vivid picture with your words. Great Job, you have me hooked.
| Arani chapter 13 . 4/3/2006
Oh, please, please update! I will beg, I will plead, I will offer cookies... At the bottom of Ch 13, it says you won't abandon your story. I'm feeling abandoned. ;) Legend is my all time favorite movie, and I have some ideas on who Connor is, but I don't want to ruin it for everyone else out there. But /please/, update so I can find out if my hunches are correct. This is a fabulous story. Well-written, believable, and with the same elegant simplicity of the movie. I'm waiting with bated breath.
| evilredmenace chapter 13 . 9/26/2005
A well rounded, insightful, and thoroughly engrossing piece! I actually stumbled upon this little corner of the fanfic world when I realized how much I've come to cherish Legend as a movie.
I guess you could say I went back and forth as far as 'shipping. Of course, Jack and Lily will always have my loyalty, but I find the contrast with Connor to be more interesting. In many ways, he embodies polar qualities of Jack, and yet they are amazingly attractive.
As I was reading, I kept thinking how interesting it was that Lily wasn't bespelled, or without choice. It would be so easy for Darkness to manipulate her, and to shift blame on another party. She is far more interesting as someone who has been "awakened," as far as sensories. In an almost biblical way, she has chosen her path, and received knowledge but with an accompanied loss of innocence.
| Greenleaf7 chapter 13 . 7/30/2005
*cries* Just when it was getting good. I'm so enjoying this. Please please please update soon.
| monkeyinashrub chapter 13 . 7/9/2005
This is the greatest Legend fan fiction I have ever read. I salute you. Keep up the great work.
| The Second Batgirl chapter 13 . 7/4/2005
Shocking. You updated. :P But seriously, I love bickering. And there is bickering. You did a great job, as always.
| Dark Gotham chapter 13 . 7/4/2005
| Ahome Malfoy chapter 12 . 7/2/2005
Your story is wonderful, i like it very much, plase continue, update soon!