Reviews for Torpor
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Oky Verlo chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
Hinata and Naruto make the cutest couple in my opinion.

Good job.

Toodles and love,

Oky Verlo
morisato chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
great story, short but good.

nice details, i like that :P

pls get more from where this came from :3
070 chapter 1 . 2/15/2004
That was cute. _ Nice job.
Tiger5913 chapter 1 . 8/5/2003
Aww, how cute... And girl, there are already tons of YAOI Naruto and Sasuke fics; we need more NaruHina fics!
abcdefghijklmnop chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
kk i wanna see how this turns out.. keep writing!D
yoko sereana lita chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
I don't like the drama but the rest was good.
yurimi-neko chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
ahh...bery berry nice! me DESPISES yaoi/yuri/and shota and all tha disgustin stuff _
Nyrgoalie chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
Well, it's pretty good, but it seems a bit awkward sometimes. The whole scene is just a little...weird. I don't know exactly why, but maybe it just seems a bit rushed. As for Naruto being OOC, I think that is ok considering what has happened to him in your fic world. Good job.
Naruke chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
*bursts into tears because its so poetic*
Bishiehuggler chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
*squeakers* Hinata-chan no kawaii! . I love her to death, se really is adorable. You portrayed her very well.
radicalL chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
WOO! Luv it!