Reviews for Deal with the Devil |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao, this one is going to have the weebs rattled too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() did micheal just fucking quote Yoda? XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep up the good work I love this story so far and I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first part of the chapter felt too much like rape Michael said no over and over again |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far I have skipped every chapter, only skimming to find out if he has gone back to being a male. This shit has been disappointing since he turned into a female. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shame that you pussied out at the end with the Female Michael lemon... Would have been far more interesting to see that one to its conclusion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is going to be such a waste of chapters and plot progression. It's literally just filler. Instead of actually training up your OC, you do this gimmick. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is gay. |
![]() ![]() make runeas us the spell to turn in to a man or give her a spell to make her futanari |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao, you've set off the weebs into malding with the last chapter and probably this one as well. Instead of just skimming the chapter and coming back when the thing they like is back or simply leaving for good since they're so disturbed by words, they instead announce their coming departure like an airplane for some reason. Good chapter, still hilarious |
![]() ![]() love it |
![]() ![]() well considering she looks like a 8 year old girl her being with any guy would make them a pedo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the great chapter, and keep up the awesome work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yah didnt like the end of this chapter, if i wanted a female OC lead, i would have read 1, if i knew this was gonna have genderbent, i would have passed on this fic, if this is gonna be a thing, please mention it on the header so ppl who don't want to read genderbent MC can avoid being disappointed, will see next chapter if i will decide to drop this or continue. |