Reviews for Deal with the Devil
Terracotta Tortilla chapter 13 . 1/9
Lmao, this one is going to have the weebs rattled too.
ShayMichaels chapter 12 . 1/5
did micheal just fucking quote Yoda? XD
Haseo187 chapter 13 . 1/4
Keep up the good work I love this story so far and I can't wait to read more!
Gemini-Spark chapter 13 . 1/4
The first part of the chapter felt too much like rape Michael said no over and over again
Fredward1 chapter 13 . 1/4
So far I have skipped every chapter, only skimming to find out if he has gone back to being a male. This shit has been disappointing since he turned into a female.
Uday Sra chapter 13 . 1/3
Awesome.
Zweig chapter 13 . 1/3
Shame that you pussied out at the end with the Female Michael lemon... Would have been far more interesting to see that one to its conclusion.
Sandman001 chapter 12 . 12/18/2024
This is going to be such a waste of chapters and plot progression. It's literally just filler. Instead of actually training up your OC, you do this gimmick.
VincentFS chapter 11 . 12/15/2024
This is gay.
Guest chapter 12 . 12/15/2024
make runeas us the spell to turn in to a man or give her a spell to make her futanari
Terracotta Tortilla chapter 12 . 12/15/2024
Lmao, you've set off the weebs into malding with the last chapter and probably this one as well. Instead of just skimming the chapter and coming back when the thing they like is back or simply leaving for good since they're so disturbed by words, they instead announce their coming departure like an airplane for some reason.

Good chapter, still hilarious
Guest chapter 11 . 12/14/2024
love it
steve chapter 10 . 12/14/2024
well considering she looks like a 8 year old girl her being with any guy would make them a pedo
Mr.BrownOptometrist chapter 11 . 12/14/2024
Thank you for the great chapter, and keep up the awesome work
TehDIGI chapter 11 . 12/14/2024
Yah didnt like the end of this chapter, if i wanted a female OC lead, i would have read 1, if i knew this was gonna have genderbent, i would have passed on this fic, if this is gonna be a thing, please mention it on the header so ppl who don't want to read genderbent MC can avoid being disappointed, will see next chapter if i will decide to drop this or continue.
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