Hola, quizás sea un poco tarde, pero me alegro que hayas podido continuar con este fanfic, me sorprendió ver que este fanfic lo hayas reescrito ya que ya me había resignado que a que nunca se continuará, es por eso que me alegra que la continúes, espero con ansias el siguiente cap

Great story I remember reading the original this one is honestly better because I feel like this has kept a lot closer to Raynare’s canon character I can’t wait for the next chapter also please ignore the troll below this comment I literally checked the profile and they’ve never written a thing on this website

Wow, this is terrible. Maybe stay away from writing forever.

Well, it's my first time reading this. Absolutlely cinema Roger... kkk
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Holy shit man I remember reading the old version of this fanfic back when it first came out in eighth grade. Holyyyyyy shit bro I've read so much fanfiction in my life but never before have I felt obligated to actually write a review. I've been following your work for a while and your stories are actually heart moving. I'm loving the vibe of the characters in this rework, keep up the great work man.

I will say this is so far an improvement over the original version, whichwhile goodfelt a little ooc at times, though it was necessary given the nature of the characters involved.
This, however? Much more in line with Raynare's canon personality (what little we see before she was slain). Look forward to chapter 3.

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Yo dude amazing chapter! I love the ways you’ve changed and updated from the old version. Personally, the older version is also a gem, but it’s much tamer and less like the actual characters, but there’s a beauty to it too. I love that Raynare is more realistic, and the added twist of Mittelt being an actual “fallen” angel is so interesting. Personally while watching the actual anime, I always felt like Dohnaseek was one of the more powerful of the 4, probably just below Raynare, but I like that Mittelt is getting some attention. I don’t see it in many fanfics. I love the OC’s too, and I’m trying to rack my brain for who Maria is. I’m in your discord so I keep up with the life updates and stuff, so I hope your health and school are going well. I can’t wait for more chapters, keep up the amazing work!

Excellent, I can’t wait for the next chapter

Good stuff. Really appreciated keeping true to Raynare's craving for validation and it going at odds with her superiority. You've really gotten her down pat.

If I had to guess regarding Maria's true identity, I'd say Mary Magdeline (The Virgin Mary feels a little too obvious), Shekinah, or a gnostic figure like Sophia.

I totally get the feeling, reviews are an insane confidence booster (when it's not a weirdo making gross requests, or a PM trying to get you to write their Fate/DXD OP OC harem "idea." HATE those. I don't even know what Fate is!) Anyways, major respect for that rant in the authors notes.

Dude it's good to have you back. Seeing this fic from you gave a wave of nostalgia.

I am loving the potential here!

I want relapsing lobotomy addict on a T-shirt immediately.

Great chapter, liking the characterisation of Raynare a lot, seems to fit much more with her in universe self and creates opportunities for some very fun encounters especially with Issei when he's stoned.

WOO! NEW CHAPTER!

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