|Reviews for Ruinations War The Search for V'ger|
| Anan chapter 1 . 4/18/2017
Hope you come back to this one
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/7/2017
I enjoyed this cross over. Granted, I tried to read it in order- took a while. Any plans to continue the stories... as far as I can tell, they are still at war in the B5 universe & in the Trek. ...
| Guest chapter 18 . 11/26/2016
An excellent and complex story to follow up its sequence among AU
What will be happening next
| Guest chapter 18 . 5/19/2015
When are you going to pick up this story again
| Guest chapter 17 . 3/20/2015
You used the C57D to make an anolgy for the Sinhindrea. The problem is, unless the reader has read your AUOC series they would have no idea what you are talking about. While I understand you probably had no intention of doing anything more than making small connections to your other stories you might want to take this into account.
| EffervescentNova chapter 18 . 10/30/2014
I've enjoyed this edition of the extended story the most so far, the Q have taken on a more defined role that suits them. All the universes that have been added still don't quite work together all at once.
| EffervescentNova chapter 13 . 10/29/2014
Tasha was said to have developed affection for her Romulan husband there was never any mention of rapes. Why would the romulan coerce Tasha into marriage if he were just going to rape her in any case?
| EffervescentNova chapter 8 . 10/29/2014
Data is not a silicon based life form, the Federation abandoned that technology centuries ago.
Zero point warp reactor? I see you're continuing to jumble science types of words together in the traditional Star Trek fashion.
| EffervescentNova chapter 7 . 10/29/2014
We already know from DS9 that Starfleet would've pressed the attack against the cylon construction facilities, leaving them room to rebuild is precisely what the Federation refused to allow the Dominion who were far less of a threat than the Cylons. An unfinished space station should've been a top priority, also the complete eradication of the Cylons from this system would've been necessary.
The Q have never added anything to fanfiction, mostly because they can snap their fingers and make the efforts of humans irrelevant completely. This story is no different, you have to strain in order to find ways to limit the Q and it hasn't worked well. Iblis and his race were never anything close to the Q. Maybe the ascended of the Stargate universe.
Too many old characters have been shoe horned into this fic, admirals commanding ships with their old crews from years earlier?
| EffervescentNova chapter 5 . 10/28/2014
Why has the Voyager crew remained unchanged? Why is an Admiral in command of the Voyager? Doesn't it have a captain? If promotion to admiral did not prevent one from commanding a vessel then why hasn't Picard accepted his promotion? This wasn't thought through very well.
There are a significant amount of female captains and admirals in this story, an unbelievable amount really. Including special ops commando female captains too. I know that later versions of Star Trek was more The Company Men with it's boardroom corporate feel than Star Wars, even so this is conspicuous.
The battle was incoherent and difficult to follow much like the rest of this story, and for some reason only a few ships have the incredibly effective ablative armor.
There is also a suggestion that other starfleet captains are inadequate to the task. The colonials have faced one enemy which completely butchered almost to exctinction. Starfleet has faced many enemies and recently 3 major interstellar wars, more for older members of Starfleet. The idea that these Starfleet personnel are wet behind the ears or are inexperienced is a joke.
This story is simply not as good as either the WorldWar crossover stories or Another Perspective crossover.
| EffervescentNova chapter 2 . 10/28/2014
Defiant class ships aren't so easily overcome even if you can get passed their shields by actually managing to strike the highly manouvreable ship then the ablative armor will still provide significant protection from attack. The Defiant class was overgunned and overpowered and had the combat ability similar to that of a Intrepid class ship ie. Voyager. They were after all designed to take on the Borg with heavy overwhelming firepower.
Iblis in no way ever even once demostrated the power of the Q. Many of his miracles in BSG turned out to be due to other influences.
| EffervescentNova chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
More Stargate, what happened to the ascended? If the original timeline was destroyed, no Goua'uld and no Stargates then who is responsible for the temporal guild? Why would this guild resist the Federation? It was always suggested that the temporal cold war was fought between existing powers in the milky way galaxy with at least some of the factions known to the 24th century Federation.
| skelly78 chapter 18 . 8/6/2014
Is this story ever going to be continued? It's been a while since there was an update.
| ThanosofTitan chapter 18 . 5/7/2014
Pretty sure sensor systems don't work like that
| ThanosofTitan chapter 17 . 5/6/2014
You just had to go and reference the second-worst Star Trek episode of all time, didn't you?