|Reviews for Learning to Trust|
| Anantsu chapter 27 . 2/1/2004
wow..*is in awe*... *sniff*... Great, great story girl... I will never be as good as you.. wow..
| Inspirationwriter chapter 26 . 1/31/2004
Wow. Wow. Wow. That was soo god. It's probaly the best fanfiction story I've ever read. Wish I would have the talent to write like that. sigh...
| kaiba's run-away bride chapter 27 . 11/29/2003
it was great! you gotta love those kaiba fics. they are da bomb!oh yes! :)
| arien's shadow chapter 27 . 11/20/2003
I just wanted to say...THAT WAS AWESOME! You wrote it so well...the ending was a tear jerker! thamks a bunch! :D i loved it!
| kikoken chapter 27 . 10/31/2003
Oh yeah! Bring on the wedding bells! Finally, somone actually softens Kaiba's cold heart. This was one of the BEST Yu-Gi-Oh fanfics I have ever read. See? I added this to my favorites and named this fic as my fvorite top 6. Read my fanfic when you have a chance okay? Its a romance about Kaiba too and more about Kaiba will be coming soon. I knew the man had a heart, he just had to open up! Great story...ciao!
Ps. You have my respect. Keep on writing, you're a great writer.
| kikoken chapter 26 . 10/31/2003
Damn, that was so *sniff* sweet! Dammit, this is an awesome read! VERY AWESOME READ!
| kikoken chapter 25 . 10/31/2003
Yeah he defeated that evil Jared! yeah! *sprays confetti all around Serena and Kaiba who blush red with nervousness*
Congrats people! Congrats!
| kikoken chapter 24 . 10/31/2003
Kaiba, I swear I'm going to smack the tar out of you if you lose to this moron that keeps laughing! Dammit his laugh is pissing me off. KICK HIS ASS!
| kikoken chapter 23 . 10/31/2003
Kick his ass Kaiba! Kick it good! Even I'm rootin' for ya even though you're still the spoiled bratty rich boy...*receives death glare*
Okay, enough of the bratty stuff. Let's see some dueling action!
| kikoken chapter 22 . 10/31/2003
God , these two make the cutest couple huh? Giggling, laughing, man, what a couple. But then again the inevitable approaches...I hope Kaiba wins this duel. He just has to...dammit I'll cry if he doesn't! He is my favorite character...even though he could be a pain in the ass.
kikoken: You are. Calling me an annoying little authoress. How could you?
Kaiba: Well stop calling me bratty rich boy.
kikoken: Okay, fine. I call a truce.
Kaiba: *laughs in my face* No
kikoken: Spoiled bratty rich boy! *turns back to the computer while Kaiba just glares*
So yeah I'm continueing on with the next chapter.
| kikoken chapter 21 . 10/31/2003
I sense a growing power struggle. I wonder if this Jared even know it? Kaiba and Serena better watch their backs, Yugi was right. Definitely look out for the suspicious stuff.
| kikoken chapter 20 . 10/31/2003
Serena, you go girl! Kaiba is good-looking, at least when I see him in the cartoon, and dammit kaiba, admit you're in L-O-V-E! Cupid stuck the arrow in your heart and thawed it! I'm glad that kaiba is like this now, gosh, Serena is lucky!
| kikoken chapter 19 . 10/31/2003
Yeah, they'll need to eat alright. They need a full stomach to fight against the evil and an empty stomach is a no-no. Eat up people! We gotta a world to save!
| kikoken chapter 18 . 10/31/2003
Well, a changed Pegasus. Something you certainly didn't see in the cartoon. I wonder, will you ever hear about him again? Hm...but I hope this information is sueful for both of them-Serena and Kaiba. And damn, they make a cute couple! Kaiba's very romantic when he's hooked on a girl, I'v been noticing that in all these Kaiba/OC character romance stories. Interesting.
| kikoken chapter 17 . 10/31/2003
Very, very, very well written chapter. The battle lines have been set huh? To save the world, yeah I knew this was coming. C'mon Serena girl, kick some ass!