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Oldflowers chapter 2 . 6/1 I love this chapter! The writing is quick, incisive, and very descriptive without being overly wordy. You choose your words very carefully, and it shows. You also managed to develop so many characters at once in such a short amount of time! Loving this series so far, keep it up! |
Oldflowers chapter 1 . 5/21 Stunning chapter! Your writing is quick, clever, and incisive. You don't waste words, and your pacing is superb. You did a great job depicting Lia's ego and envy, and her hatred for her little brother was as compelling as it was sad. But still, despite her faults, I felt for her. You can really tell how much she's hurting. Her air of superiority is totally false, constructed to conceal her deep insecurities. Plus, your depiction of my character, Magic, was fun and intriguing. I feel honored that you wrote him, however briefly. Bravo! Can't wait for the next one! |