Reviews for The Celestial Roulette |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, I think I miss the queen of escalation though. I definitely have never seen Eden restored before. Not sure if the family ever ended up deified or at least Vicky and Amy… unless I missed something in that final rush… |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's pretty sweet. Fucking A. Fantastic story, would and will read again another time. Same for others though sadly a number are still in the start up. Great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As a God who can create worlds and all that. Couldn't he remove everyone's shards and grant them their powers directly to their bodies without them? Removing their link and need? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wouldn't the boundary power allow him to take the guy not only back to his world but back to just after he disappeared from his daughters life? Appearing in his world right after his disappearance so there's no worry about anything bad having happened to her? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fucking awesome and hilarious. The bus is great and I know Jack all about the dimensional ship but that and far more so the tech protection being blown off just because it wasn't useful at the moment made me want to hit him. The second one was WAY to major to blow off. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just woke up and trying to remember but I can't recall him having any means to get around beyond his own feet and his vehicle. Now also carrying a new phone given to him by the hero group I think which is likely monitored. How does he plan to avoid being kidnapped and forced into buffing servitude or hiding his identity period when he's basically travel wise a civilian moving around and carrying an easily hackable phone that probably already is low jacked? Haven't seen a sliver of him or Amy thinking about this. |
![]() ![]() Again another knock out of the park Loved the lemons Loved the ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice story, even if I'm a tad disappointed we didn't get a Carol spice,(but with how emotional him curing his dad was that would have probably felt bad, even if they could have used him needing more points as an excuse) or any PhO segments. But with how fast paced the story went it's no suprise, for instance squealer did from my perspective not contribute a single time except for point gains, her helping dragon in the bot that offed Levi felt more like an afterthought. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the story, was really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, I feel like sending Regent to jail was the most likely result, too. Felix is a pretty fair person, which is exactly why I can't see him putting Grue away for (stupidly, I might add) kidnapping a little girl in the middle of an Endbringer fight, while letting Alex go just because he's traumatized |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story was going well and was funny. but I can't do the incest. just no. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love his Hero persona lol, I thought him being a Joke Hero will be conflicting later on with how powerful some of the perks are. But Go off Cake Hero lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am very sad to see this story end, as I am for all worthy stories. Absolute banger, as usual Shiro. I look forward to enjoying more of your stories. : ) |