Reviews for The Reaver's Legacy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am not saying your harry doesn't have morals here, he does but he doesn't have that murder/revenge boner for voldemort and the death eaters, he just wants to be unbothered and live his life like a normal wizard would but because he is a protagonist of a fantasy novel, some shit always gets in his way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well thanks for actually having him practice instead of just having him get it on first try, so there is some semblance of logic here. Also, having harry always go for revenge is ki da getting old in your stories man do something different for a while , have him resemble his canon self, he just always wanted a family but never could get one till the Weasleys and ginny after. He always had his morals and as this is canon divergence from Hogwarts first year so I assume he would have been like his canon self, have the same morals and less revenge minded unlike your durmstrang harry where I can see how he would change but that wasn't also explained as well that could have been. So please explore other genres for harry other than revenge and op harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Look man, I get the appeal of op harry but corporeal on thr first try is a little much, I can see him have a good shield going fir to his occlumency but a corporeal is stretching it and also harry is a good student but he has no drive to study, maybe he gets here a little bit but it feels out of character as we see in canon that doesn't change shit for harry as we see him get into contact with voldemort. Also why the evans dude, why bring them into this, it just feels so weird that the evans were a generational family from like 1000 years ago I maybe could believe 200-300 years but 1000 is also stretching don't do thr whole muggleborn have a magic ancestor, it kinda ruins the whole majic part of it, like it could go to anyone and manifest in them but just there is a more probability of people already having it, having children capable of magic but it should still be random, magic can do anything and I would have liked to see it explored more in canon but what can you do, but pls don't do thr whole evans thing, it is cringe and sucks ass. Also, the muggleborn thing I am not sure if it is actually stated in canon or not that there is an ancestor or not capable of magic but I sure hope not. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter and great fight scene. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to finally see some proper peverell magic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still like the story (as well written as the others from your imagination ;o) ) But (and here it is) Are you starting to running out of fresh ideas? I mean 'come on' The army of dead knights reminds a lot of Tolkiens (or Jacksons) 'lord of the ring' wouldn'tyou agree? Nevertheless so entertaining and superbly executed as ever! Wish you all the best! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great to see Harry using Death’s magic so effectively. Keen to see more of it. Amazing work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() great. thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry Drops in Anakin StyleLove it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Merci pour le chapitre |
![]() ![]() ![]() Let's hope nothing happened to tonks and she got the cup back safely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter. thanks |