Good chapter, one question, are you going to continue with the story?

STFU opPReSsOr oF NIgGerS, fuckin edgy ass, jobless mf living in their parent's basement being a damn parasite that has too much free time, how bout you use that free time to take a shower and rethink your life choices. To the author, ignore that parasite, keep doing what you like, at least you're doing something productive unlike some edgy mfs here

If that is Albion, ima loose my mind. Also may celebrate for some dayum reason. And fuqit, Praise a cheese wheel in Shegorath's name just cuz lol.

Hate how arrogant is she to him

in regards to Akash being linked to all creation? no. it is linked to the specific creation of Nasuverse and all adjacent world lines in its tree. Different Verse. Different Tree. Different Orgin Point. The format hasnt been too bad. its a minor issue. Romance is a preference issue that aint your problem. My only gripe is the chapter lengths. Again. A Preference issue. Dont gotta care lol.

Don’t bother reading. I jumped 60 chapters ahead and the author still doesn’t know how to use quotation marks. Crazy how you’re promoting your patreon without a half-decent formatting. Seeing good story ideas wasted like this really makes it so frustrating as a fanfiction reader. But hey, at least it’s free, and I didn’t waste my time thinking the formatting is going to fix itself after a few chapters.

Hey fuckface, ever heard of a parenthesis? You know, these “” things? Clearly not, because your writing is worse than a lobotomized orangutan.

Thanks for the chapter!

Good entry to see here.

This so frustrating to read. Why is the formatting so bad?

Looks well on how this went.

Pretty good on how this was done here.

Shit romance kill yourself

Looks well on how it was done.

Chapter 11, What do you mean the world doesn't fall under the jurisdiction of Akasha, that is, the fucking creator of the all creation?