Reviews for Fourth installment of the Hardy Boys Pressure Series: Second Chance |
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![]() ![]() Hi unable to view chaper 5. I am so looking forward to reading your chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Joe needs to go home to his family now |
![]() ![]() Frank uncovered some information that could really be helpful. Especially about the tunnels. I also am beginning to wonder if ethers huaband uncovered something he shouldn't have. Either that or he is one of the crooks, but my guess is he uncovered finally let his emotions out. Callie and the others there, also helps his birthday. Also, when earlier on when joe didn't feel comfortable with dr. Reece, i wonder if his instincts sensed that she knew Dr. Gregory? Especially because his voice brought fear to joe. ! Right now the only doctor there is trust is Bear. He sure helped Fenton with some ways of working through his past. Also, let Fenton get some feelings out. Frank's birthday wishes came true! Joe is awake! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, a lot happening here. Is Joe really going to be awake, or is it a brief reprieve? So sweet if he woke up for Frank's birthday. Can Frank feel him now? Did this correspond to Frank's wish? So, Gregory was Joe's assailant? Now we need to know how Jason knows Joe. Great chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OOOh, that last part with Joe and Fenton. That is heavy stuff. I can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry for the loss of your grandmother, but you are right. You will reunite in heaven with Jesus, someday. My sympathies are with you and your family I have enjoyed this story Fenton is right. There is something wrong with what dr. Gregory is doing. Also, Stephen has an uneasiness around hear. I think bear was giving him a hint when he says some hamper the healing. Though I would keep a close watch on Dr. Gregory, because Dr. Gregory is not doing well in concealing the hatred he has for Fenton by his facial expressions. Also, it seems like Paul was just using Ethel. I could be wrong about that. I could also be wrong, but I think ethel''s his and is still alive. Hopefully, Fenton can reconnect and help joe come back to them, but if he keeps having visits by his nightly visitor. Joe will keep retreating into himself. But at least Fenton is going to start facing his past. So maybe that can bring joe around sooner. I am still surprised frank has not asked Fenton about what happened to joe when they were younger when he was told to keep a close eye on joe. Update as soon as possible |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was Joe on the Sea Spray when he was abused? No wonder he is claustrophobic. Still waiting to hear the conversation between Frank and Fenton over what happened when they were little. I think Jason was there? I hope Fenton didn't just out him to Gregory. The plot thickens as they say. Good chapter. :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Erin, My sympathies for the loss of your Grandmother. Lovely update, meeting new characters. Looking forward to Frank's feeling when Callie and the rest of the friends come up for a visit. Looking forward to Fenton digging into Mr. Gregory and Dr. Stephens |
![]() ![]() I was did the review that is listed as guest. I don't know why it didn't put my name on it. I believe that whatever Fenton was arguing when joe was little, and everyone was extra protective over joe, is connected to what is going on now? I was just surprised frank didn't ask Fenton about. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. So, Sam isn't related to Jason. Is it possible Allen Rogers is the mystery man? Is Allen Rogers Jason's father? That may explain why he only sees him sporadically. It may also explain how Jason knows who Joe is. Obviously, whoever the mystery man is he has access to Second Chances. If Fenton ran across Gregory in the past he is tied in too. Lots going on here. Good chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() The shadowy figure that keeps visiting joe at night is probably why joe is not having any improvements. I thought frank would bring up to Fenton, about frank remembering Fenton, Laura, and. His grandparents arguing when frank was younger. I have a feeling whatever happened then is connected to what is going on recently. Maybe if Fenton is asked about it, Fenton will remember something, and frank will have a clearer picture to help Fenton connect more with joe. I also have a feeling Ethel's husband may not be dead, and be involved. May even be allen Rogers, himself. I could be wrong, though. Update as soon as possible |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, creepy! Someone better get on that shadowy presence. Glad to have an update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for updating. Can’t wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter I cannot wait for the next one |