Reviews for Voyage of Do'Urden Part I
Nessa Ar-Fieneil chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
really you should consider putting this all in one multichapter story
RatheraMutemwiya chapter 1 . 6/12/2001
Okay... this is so completely out of character in every since that it goes beyond being fanfic... you'd have been better off writing about a different house and creating a few characters from scratch so that it could be believable...
saltedbolts chapter 1 . 6/1/2001
It's 'Swirfnerbin', not svirnebli. Besides, when did Malice and her daughters suddenly become magic-users? Being high priestesses means they have never studied in Sorcere, thus cannot be mages or sorcerers - unless they've studied in secret, of course, which I fail to see when and why since they were *high priestesses*.
squirellman chapter 1 . 3/31/2001
write more i command it.