Reviews for The Way
vocalmystic chapter 20 . 7/16/2004
oh. Very dramatic. I like I like. I'm sorry I didn't post earlier, I barely had time to post, so yeah... The plotline is exectuted expertly. SHE'S MY BEST FRIEND PEOPLE! Kayla, you are a very very gifted writer. I pretty sure you hear it a lot, but I just wanted to say it again cuz you're so great! GReat! LOVE YA!
epicyclical chapter 20 . 7/9/2004
K-la, I haven't read this story in so long, but every time I do it draws me in. Now it all makes sense to me: Draco as Mordred, Pansy as Morgaine, Christian as Arthur, and Blaise as Morgause (of course, all of this is according to 'Queen of Camelot' instead of 'The Mists of Avalon'; otherwise Blaise would have to be Morgaine, which would definetly not work for this story). And you were very crafty with the scabbard for Draco and the jewel for Pansy, both in the way Madam Tsion gives the items to each of them and in the way the scabbard and the jewel are related to each other. I'm starting to see how this is all playing out. I can't wait for your next post! Love ya!
meg chapter 20 . 7/8/2004
magnificent! The only criticism i have is that you have used the wrong words sometimes. for example, you used where to describe when draco was being fitted out, when you should have written wear. there are a few more points where you have used incorrect grammar, but other than that, a truly magnificent work. hope you publish something, as your descriptions of human emotions are so brilliant! very in depth. love it!
yOuRs tRuLy x0x chapter 20 . 7/1/2004
omg update this story soon! read it in two days and i am addicted! must read on to see what happens between pansy and draco! D
Megan chapter 20 . 6/26/2004
I like this story a lot, but I'm just saying that everyone is still clueless about the riddle the Hermione set. And please, you need to update. Badly. But it's really wonderful though!
Me chapter 20 . 6/26/2004
I loved this chapter and I can't wait till the Christmas ball, hopefuly you'll update soon because I think this is the best Pansy/Draco story ever. Your a great writer because you keep me hooked in ever chaper. Keep on writing great stories like this one.
AGirlWonder chapter 20 . 6/26/2004
Anne-Evans89 chapter 20 . 6/26/2004

Great story!

I've never really read a fanfic about Draco and pansy before, but I must say, I really like this one :-)

Can't wait to find out what'll happen at the Christmas ball..

Update soon! :-)
meg chapter 8 . 6/25/2004
I have been forced to sit through class story reading and when my friends recommended this site, I was a little apprehensive, but after reading your story, my faith in the young authors of the world has been restored. I hope you will send some of your work to publishing companies, as I believe that you have the potential to go far. I sat down tonight, having never been to site, and read chapters 1-8. Your writing has progressed magnificently and you have developed the characters well, giving a valuable insight into the psyche of Draco and Pansy. The harry potter books shall never be looked at in the same way again.

P.S. Do you have your own site? please tell me.
naigel chapter 20 . 6/25/2004
A big great story... Keep up the good works!
meg chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
tip next time, try to explain the atmosphere, what the characters felt about their surroundings instead of what was actually there. Otherwise, a brilliant story with some well developed characters
AussieDracoLover chapter 19 . 6/17/2004
What an awesome story! Please update soon, I'm loving it! I LUV DRACO!
sugarbabe1 chapter 19 . 6/15/2004
Omg ur story is amazing! Please you have to continue! Pansy and draco 4 ever
epicyclical chapter 19 . 5/8/2004
Wow, Kay. This is amazing! It's so rich in the Arthurian legends that I don't know where to begin to look for clues to this story. Good job on this chapter! I would say more, but then I would go off in a long, rambling discourse about what I saw in this chapter and what it could possibly mean in regards to the plot line... so yeah. I'll stop right here. Keep up the good work and good luck with your production at school!
Lour chapter 19 . 4/30/2004
Cliff hanger! Interesting, Fantastic, really, it is, update again soon!
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