|Reviews for The Scientist|
| Porn Yesterday chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
You rely on imagery heavily. And I like that about you. Mostly coz you're good at it.
The ending was beautiful and just right. I'm glad they didn't need to proclaim their love for one another. They know. Coz they're that good.
Good job, this was painfully realistic that reminded me of a fairytale's fairytale. I don't mind the fact it's slash!LokiBartleby. That just made this piece all the better.
The length made this nice.
Be good, do good, and keep doing that good thing you do.
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Bisexual.
Look, it's a dead body... !
It's a girl...
Let's poke her boobs!
Morbid, am I not?
| Noia chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
That was really, really good. Exactly what I wanted to read after watching Dogma. I like your style of writing; You rely heavily on imagery, but you totally get your point across. Very touching, I loved it.
| Gackt no Hime chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
some typoes: missing words, mispelled words, grammar, etc. The fic is good, but the above mentioned problems distract from the fic's goodness, and interrupts the flow of "stream of consciousness" style that you have going. Fix the typoes, and make the fic better!
Keep it up!
| Hobbit-Luvr chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
Wow. Left me speachless, it was beautiful. Nearly put tears in my eyes. Very truthful, perfect song, and perfect writing style. Great.
| Kagedtiger chapter 1 . 2/18/2004
Gee, that makes me wish I knew the song. Ah well. This is good. It's a little confusing in places, and very stream-of-consciousness, but the surreality is a hard thing to do correctly, and you do it very well. Nice job!
| KillerLover chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
-sob- so good. I love the scientist (song and your fic) so good. The song fitted in so neatly, when I saw this I was skeptical but when I read I was like 'oh my god it's so good' oh and by the way normaly my reviews are 'good job please continue' but I really liked this and I really had to tell you.
| Tristan2 chapter 1 . 8/8/2003
Wah! That was SO excellent! As soon as I saw the first line I was like, "Okay, brilliance here." EXCELLENT choice of a song, I really love what you did with everything! :D! I may emulate what you did using Coldplay, because I had seriously been thinking of writing a Dogma fic to "God Put A Smile Upon Your Face" but I'd definately give you credit for securing my idea. Exceptional fic! Keep writing!
| Shiny Nickel chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
Oh My GOD! This was so beautiful. I almost cried. You stayed in character and the way you portrayed emotions was really good. I normally don't like slash, but i think this might convert me... Sorry if i've wasted your time.
| PretendFan chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
*sigh* Again, I cannot find words good enough for how much I loved this piece. I really enjoyed your style in this one. It was unique and it worked. Oh, and normally I don't care much for songfics, but this one was really really good. The song's lyrics fitted the story perfectly. Great job.
| datastwistergal chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
I usually don't like slash, but this was interesting. You should check out my story. Really..uh..interesting.