Reviews for When You Sleep
Saoirse3473 chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
WOW! Just absolutely amazing!

"My tears form a flood

a torent

that I know will mix with

your flowing anger..."

Sending chills down my back.

Love,

julia

P.S. i just saw the movie today...even though i didn't see the second one before..but after i stopped blockbuster and rented all five that i could. I had a star wars movie night...hehe
Rose-Arwen-Padme chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
Chills. Wow. That was *very* powerful. Fantasticly done; I won't forget this one. Bravo!

"and I swear you are

grimacing

enjoying the feel of blood on your hands"

Like I said, chills. Great job. Every line was dripping with talent. I'm in awe.