Reviews for Dunce
thirteenthwind chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
Where's the LIKE button when you need it? :D
Kelly Tolkien chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
HE HE HE!

Very good.
Unknown chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
Nicely done. I can find no real problem with this except "in these particularly circumstances" but I am sure you meant particular and those mischievous letters "l" and "y" managed to sneak past you while you weren't looking.

Vary the sentence structure (you seem to be found of the comma; while nothing is wrong with loving that dear punctuation creating new relationships with :'s :'s and -'s can greatly improve one's style) make it a little longer and you shall have a masterpiece. You have such a pronounced voice; eloquent really, it's wonderful.
damnitjillkatherine chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Eloquent!

"most of them obscene, all of them flippant" brilliance. :D

I love it.
Darkling Blue chapter 1 . 11/24/2003
oh, charming little story! i love geoffery, he's a wonderful character...
Mary chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
Haha, not what I expected...cute. I like the short and sweet ones.
murdock chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
There's much to be said for keeping it short and sweet. Charming story.
Evilstrawberry chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
Good, but short! Um...furst I thought Will was up a tree...balh. I like it!
mispel chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
I like this. My first impression was that Will was up a tree. I know that’s not right :) I love Will/Geoff.
Michelle Micky chapter 1 . 8/30/2003
Perhaps you could elaborate on it? Maybe, just a suggestion.
Nayeli Gold chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
um...odd...

Rhia