Reviews for Please Don't Go Away
LittleBlue33 chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
wow beuityful
Talking Hawk chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
(Feels an overwhelming urge to cry...)

Dangit, why? (finally chuckles softly) That was a REALLY good story. I actually felt a little disappointed when you wrote that Dori and Marlin were just friends, but then because it was so good, I shrugged my shoulders and continued on. However, I felt a lot happier when you mentioned the ambiguous friend/romantic love thing that I think might be going on. ) Thank you. In either case, AWESOME story. I really did enjoy it. Oh, and good song too (I've never heard it before, but it went really well with your story). Keep up the good work!
Aeris Tiniel Mirime chapter 1 . 8/5/2003
Gosh, that's so sad! The lyrics fit perfectly with the feeling of this fic. Also, you have an excellent writing style.
screaming truth chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
Hey, that was good.

You should put on the fic somewhere who the song is by. So people can get if they like it. :) Usually people put an Author's note for things like that.

Are you going to try to add to this, I think you could. There are many options on where you could go with this.



I Love Lance-a-Lot chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
OOh... that's very good! Poor Dory; she can't remember much. Good work!
i-luv-markMD fan chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
Oh, that was so good! Write more Finding Nemo fanfics!