You turned Kushina and Minato into this naive caricatures of themselves, it's really sad to see how you decided to butcher their characters. You are also underestimating the love between Minato and her. That whole bs with Konan is unrealistic, forced drama for nothing. I guess Naruto will have to clean up their mess AGAIN.

Kushina being back and tending to Naruto's greatest enemy, Minato betraying his wife for Konan of all people... Are you trying to get your readers to drop this story on purpose? It feels like each chapter is being written randomly, without any sensible plan in mind. This is such a mess...

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of course a canon rehash with Sayuri, saw this from a mile away. What is even the point of this story?

Not gonna lie, while it is showing i am on chapter 19, i got to chapter 26. Dude well done on the chapter, but i think psychological and drama can be the tag not adventure and drama. The last part where he just basically manipulated her was just cruel and a bit vile. Again, well done on the chapter.

All the people that let reviews in this FF have very bad reading comprehension. This is not even a neglect fanfiction, Jiraya abandons him for the same reason as the canon (the spy network and hiruzen shit), so he leaves the village with Tsunade and Mito, knowing that Tsunade would protect her. Naruto unfortunately had to cover Mito status as Jinchuriki because Hiruzen is shit like in the canon. Oh my god, this is one of the best fanfictions that I have heard, people trashtalking it are probably skipping 10k words after reading a bit. Also Thx for writing 5 chapters/120k words in 1 day they were entertaining

greymatter1098 you really need beta for your story.

why did near the end kakashi suddenly assumed karin observed naruto transform, the without karin saying anything all the nawaki and retrieval team start commenting that Naruto transformed or his new form. and why did tsunade not allow minato to be informed this seemed foolish.

another chapter, very good to see such fast release and entertaining as always too

Are you ever going address all bad reviews that you’re getting from your story. Also you write long chapters, Tsunade should’ve been in Konoha a long time ago

very nice a new chapter, enjoyably coherent and s quaint read shit is pretty alright.

definitely one of the worst fanfictions on this site,wish people like you would stop writing. y'all don't even try to get better at writing, y'all just keep posting them same stupid ideas.
copy and pasting paragraphs and ect

I'm amazed at how talented you are at writing shit.

this fic has sucked ass since you engineered a scenario where one of naruto's parent could survive and then killed them anyway.

not surprising that it continues to suck in this chapter as well, what with naruto attacking once and then keeling over for the enemy to rail him while he does nothing, and all for the author to bring in kurama?

fucking disgusting. try having consistent logic next time, dumbass.

finally able to read chap 20, had reinstall ff app to get it to loadD

Review: Ye chap 20 was pretty good and naruto and minato having meeting the way they did work well into the story progression so pretty good shit there and the bit with guy is a lil off but also works well